18:05, 29th Jun 2011
enjoy: Your icons lack shading and highlights. When you make a drawing, you should start with a sketch of the outline. ( this will be removed later. ) Then, you color the sketch a main color. This should be a bit dark and neutral, since you will be putting your shading and highlights on top of it. Deside then, where the light is hitting your object from, and start putting highlights and shadow on the object. You can find tutorials on this, all over the internet. Remember to make your drawing on different layers. If you do not know how to use layers, you can also find tutorials on this. Good luck.

enjoy: No changes made. Not approvable.

Needs shading. Please read some 2d art tutorials.

Did you make this icon? any proof you did?

good job. but like said above please but shading into it, it would look better with it.

You really know how to draw, don't you?

your icons are too cartoonish
what program did you use? Paint?
but good overall 4/5

Yeah, dont use paint and the skull is a bit wonkey.

darkdeathknight said:

Yeah, dont use paint and the skull is a bit wonkey.

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Paint is for simple edits
Photoshop and Gimp is the one you should use because its better than paint

eubz said:

You really know how to draw, don't you?

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That's the exact kind of shitty comment we don't need. It's ok to say "this is a bad icon because", but being a dick about it isn't.

Losam, the icon doesn't have shading. At all. It's great that you are trying to contribute, but you should practice some more before you post your stuff. As was suggest above, trying reading some tutorials on 2D art.

Using only the paint and the mouse is too simple for making icons.
More light and shading. Then the icon will look fine. Try with the 2D art tutorials here.

I'll work to try to improve this icon or create other.