13:50, 9th May 2010
Pyramidhe@d: This is mostly flat colours. The fire is lacking.

11th May 2010
Pyramidhe@d: No changes made

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Too blurry, I think you overused smudge.

without the cannon all are smudge

Looks really poor at this point. The cannon is all black with two white lines, add highlights.

"flame" is poorly made too, shape it a bit better and add different colors.

Ok, this icon lack things.. seriously
I'll give you some tips to improve your icon.

Here's the tip, mate:
Enlarge the cannon/gun A BIT then make it look like it is a real metal, maybe some dark gray, gray, light gray color variation.. after that add another layer and draw some flash of flames at the tip of the cannon/gun: color palettes of red, orange, yellow.. whenever you use the yellow, make sure there will be SOME (not much) white then correct the angle of the "flame" from the cannon/gun, make sure it's straight. It should be from the tip of the cannon/gun (lower left corner) straight up to the upper right corner. For the flames, do the same things..

another tip: search for pictures, and compare those with yours and adapt it.
i hope you understand it

Moar shading, and texture towards the fire and the cannon.