BTNSausage

Moderator · Jul 28, 2009

18:19, 28th Jul 2009
Hawkwing: You should work on defining the shape of the sausage.

Hawkwing: I don't see any changes.

10:03, 1st Aug 2009
zombie2279: Some more shading on the fork, a stronger tone of highlight on the uppoer part and a better visible and some more contrast on the outlines would do well. Some burnt/fried parts as seen on the pic you posted would also look well.

9:00, 7th Aug 2009
zombie2279: I wouldn't say it's not approvable, but the changes I advised are not exactly made.

supertoinkz · Jul 28, 2009

blurry me think
and also, the inside meat is pink, change its color

dansaDisco · Jul 28, 2009

IMO, that just looks like.... something else... D:

krisserz · Jul 28, 2009

This is not sausage...

breebree123 · Jul 28, 2009

this is not a sausage,looks like a "dildo" lol. .

Midnighters · Jul 28, 2009

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Creativity: 6/10
Usefulness: 8/10

Looks like the real thing? [X]

In my opinion, it needs a lot of work done to it. It needs a lot more shading or it will not be approved.

My rating on this is Lacking, it needs a lot of work done to improve it and make it look like a "Sausage".

*All these recomendations can be changed, but they are only ideas to help your icon have a chance of being approved.

Midnighters

Dentothor · Jul 28, 2009

its a good icon with good potential. potential it hasn't reached yet. id suggest adding more details to make it look "meaty" and not so blurry

The Panda · Jul 28, 2009

You need to fix the shading for one and do something with the pink area it doesn't look right.

Coinblin · Jul 28, 2009

Okay guys, how does this look like a dildo? That defintely wasn't what I was going for. Woops.
Alright, first off check this out.

Thats why the part that is cut open is pink. Because thats the color of the cooked meat. Only the outside skin is a red-brown.
Also, whats wrong with the shading? Please elaborate. Thanks

krisserz · Jul 28, 2009

But you`rs is too pink. And I think you showed it in wrong way.

Midnighters · Jul 28, 2009

It needs more shading, overall. And that sausage is not cooked in that picture, if it were cooked it would be darker. And the icon does not look realistic.

Coinblin · Jul 28, 2009

I'll work on the pink exposed part. Also, yes, the meat in the picture is cooked. If you would like to look yourself, check this url:
http://images.google.com/imgres?img...n&rlz=1C1GGLS_enUS319US319&sa=N&start=36&um=1
It shows the picture and explains that they are actually cooked. Scroll about halfway down the web page to have a look.
Thanks guys!

The Panda · Jul 28, 2009

I hope you have work in progress for the changes you've done.

Ishkhan · Jul 28, 2009

oh yeah dude thats much better, i like it, useful

Dentothor · Jul 28, 2009

zoom out on the sausage to give it more definition. cuz it looks like a wrinkley mahogany line peirced by matal prongs

supertoinkz · Jul 29, 2009

did you smudge?

krisserz · Jul 29, 2009

Better now, but still not sausage at all. Anyway big changes were done and looks now a lot better.

breebree123 · Jul 29, 2009

looks better now

enjoy · Jul 29, 2009

I really can't see the use of this icon.
And it dosen't look like a sausage.. it's to shine.

2/5

Dmazzz · Jul 29, 2009

Guys seriously... The quality in this is amazing, even toug its just a sausage look at it, its acceptable. 5/5 for its quality!

Rui · Jul 29, 2009

This sausage looks much better than the one I saw yesterday. Good job.
I admit yesterday I tried not to look at this icon because the sausage looked like something else.
Well, Coinblin, you have a sausages image over there. Try to recreate it on your icon. Make the contrast a little more noticeable, add a few darker areas, and the tiny the black points! It's looking good, but I'm sure it can become even better!

Coinblin · Jul 29, 2009

Thank you! I admit that I went about it all wrong the first time, thinking that having a cut open end on the sausage would make it seem more creative! I guess it only made it suggestive.
I'll keep on working on this one. Thanks a ton!

TheHunterKiller · Jul 30, 2009

It's pretty nice.

Vercas · Jul 31, 2009

It looks like intestines to me...

Coinblin · Jul 31, 2009

Well, thats good. Sausage is made out of intestines, among other things.

Vercas · Jul 31, 2009

*barfs*
Thanks for telling me... >.>

Midnighters · Jul 31, 2009

vercas said:
It looks like intestines to me...

It may "Look like intestines to you", but to others it doesn't.

Coinblin said:
Well, thats good. Sausage is made out of intestines, among other things.

Sausages can be made from any type of meat including beef, veal, pork, lamb and wild game...combined with seasonings and stuffed in a casing.

vercas said:
*barfs*
Thanks for telling me... >.>

Yeah, maybe now you won't have to learn it in Home-Ec in school.

Vercas · Jul 31, 2009

I'll unsubscribe from this thread. I don't want to have to eat again... again.

The Panda · Aug 1, 2009

Indeed.

Somnium · Aug 7, 2009

Yummy!

Palaslayer · Aug 10, 2009

argh, plastic.

Newuser · Jan 28, 2010

Looks good. Should be useful in a game similar to Dark Deeds or a survivor type map where you have to eat lots of foods in the game.

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