07:34, 11th Apr 2009
Paladon:

You might want to work on that red arrow thing. Make it look simple and less shaded

FU%AG&/HSDUMP;OLČFSFW SO awesome! I am proud of you

This is just my opinion, but I think that you should make a green arrow pointing up so its more like a reload icon, not just an eject clip icon.

Fix'd.

this is good, now you can use a professional icon in your shooter map for the reload ability

You're just that sexy.

Name (Item/Ability):
Reload: To replace an empty (or inferior) clip of ammunition in order to fire off more rounds.


Usefulness [8/10]:
If it weren't for the elaborate imagination of the modding community in Warcraft 3, this icon would be completely useless. But, due to the amount of Zombie and Modern Warfare maps, this is quite useful. -8/10 Good job


Quality of Look [6.5/10]:
The icon itself is occasionally out of proportion. The clip is oddly darker than the rest of the weapon, the shading isn't quite right. The red arrow isn't as smooth as it should be, which detracts from the overall look of the icon, and the color of the arrow doesn't fit very well either. The back of the gun doesn't fit well at all either, it's too large and looks as though it should be made of wood
(Apparently it's an M-16, in which case I retract the wooden rifle-back suggestion)


Overall [7/10]

hahah this made me lol good job on this one looks great gor a reload ability

Scyth-Master, good review, but I'd like to point out some minor mistakes in it:

Scyth-Master said:

If it weren't for the elaborate imagination of the modding community in Warcraft 3, this icon would be completely useless.

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lol wut? From that perspective, there would be no point in modding any game.

Scyth-Master said:

The icon itself is occasionally out of focus.

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How can it be occasionally out of focus? It's not an animation. It doesn't go out of focus then comes back again.

Scyth-Master said:

The clip is oddly darker than the rest of the weapon

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Ever heard of shading, differences between light reflections?

Scyth-Master said:

The red arrow isn't as smooth as it should be

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It was a request from the moderation to remove details from the arrow.

Scyth-Master said:

and the color of the arrow doesn't fit very well either.

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I had to find a way to make it different from the rest of the icon. Imagine it with a grey or black arrow.

Scyth-Master said:

The back of the gun doesn't fit well at all [...] it's too large

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Explain that to the inventor of the M-16 assault rifles. Yes, it fits if the magazine is placed.

Scyth-Master said:

and looks as though it should be made of wood.

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Why wood? Imo, it looks like everything but wood.

Thank you, i need that.

zombie2279 said:

Scyth-Master, good review, but I'd like to point out some minor mistakes in it:

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Thank you in advance...

zombie2279 said:

lol wut? From that perspective, there would be no point in modding any game.

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I mean for the most parts most maps don't use an ability to reload weapons, they do it automatically (even when modded to be futuristic).

zombie2279 said:

How can it be occasionally out of focus? It's not an animation. It doesn't go out of focus then comes back again.

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I meant some bits of it are out of proportion, I'll edit that.

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Ever heard of shading, differences between light reflections?

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Yes, but it seems a little off (also a little bit too 2-dimensional shading-wise).

zombie2279 said:

It was a request from the moderation to remove details from the arrow.

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Strange, but okay.

zombie2279 said:

I had to find a way to make it different from the rest of the icon. Imagine it with a grey or black arrow.

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I was thinking yellow or green actually... black or gray wouldn't make any sense, be realistic.

zombie2279 said:

Explain that to the inventor of the M-16 assault rifles. Yes, it fits if the magazine is placed.

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Well, if it is a M-16 Assault Rifle, it isn't dark enough than. I've fired quite a few at the police firing range, and they're not gray by a long shot.

zombie2279 said:

Why wood? Imo, it looks like everything but wood.

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Because the overwhelming rustic look of the icon detracts from the quality imo, but it's your decision. I do like it, don't get me wrong.

i like it :3 shading is good, details are good, though it is kinda monotone, but that's typical with guns

5/5 for the creativity! thats great!
you are getting better and better

TurtleRacingCar said:

5/5 for the creativity!

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Lolwut?

A useful icon, nicely done. 4/5

The arrow wouldn't go up?

I think the arrow looks a little bit blurry actualy. But the rest of the icon is awesome. Great work. 4/5 - Because of blurry arrow. ^-^

Requesting Land mine, please.

5/5 for the creativity!

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¿Lolque?

Thanks! I will use it in my map, of course I will credit you as well. 5/5

Sleight of Hand, lol.

A very nice Icon. I just downloaded it to use in my new map.