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BTNMoonlitGraveyard
- Author(s)
- Mainy, War_Golum
- Tags
- Spell / Ability, Undead
- Size
- 55.52 KB
- Rating
- Downloads
- 821
- Created
- Apr 14, 2010
- Updated
- Apr 14, 2010
- Resources
- 1
- State
Approved
This bundle is marked as recommended. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
I tried to represent a cemetery enchanted by the moonlight.
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* less bright on the moon
* rebuilt the wrapping of the crosses
* more shanding
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====== 2.0 ====================================================
* resized moon
* showed more ground
* added more crosses
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====== 1.0 ====================================================
* more shading
* small reduction brightness
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please do not edit my icons without my permission
Keywords:
Grave, Night, Dark, Rebirth, Reincarnation, Unholy, Moon, Light, Shadow, Ressusect, Emanate, Path, Decay, Death, Sanctuary, Malefic.
====== 3.0 ====================================================
* less bright on the moon
* rebuilt the wrapping of the crosses
* more shanding
=============================================================
====== 2.0 ====================================================
* resized moon
* showed more ground
* added more crosses
=============================================================
====== 1.0 ====================================================
* more shading
* small reduction brightness
=============================================================
please do not edit my icons without my permission
Keywords:
Grave, Night, Dark, Rebirth, Reincarnation, Unholy, Moon, Light, Shadow, Ressusect, Emanate, Path, Decay, Death, Sanctuary, Malefic.
Reviews
- Joined
- Jan 12, 2010
- Messages
- 769
Currently use in my map project, like a reincarnation spell only possible during the night.
- Joined
- Dec 6, 2007
- Messages
- 2,228
Generally nice but it rather appears like a snowball.
Just make it less bright but keep a shiny effect.
Just make it less bright but keep a shiny effect.
- Joined
- Nov 6, 2008
- Messages
- 8,316
I think that's because of the shading, because moon is supposed to be bright. Also, try enlarging the crosses, because they are hardly visible and easy-to-understand in the actual icon.
- Joined
- Jan 12, 2010
- Messages
- 769
Yes, the main objective is distace the brightness of the moon.
As the crosses I used the same size as the original Blizzard icon Reincarnation, but if necessary I'll change
- Joined
- Jun 17, 2008
- Messages
- 550
As a moon, this icon isn't bad.
But if you prefer us to see it this icon as a 'moonlit graveyard', then make the crosses more visible/ show more of the land/ move the moon higher etc (you get the drift).
But if you prefer us to see it this icon as a 'moonlit graveyard', then make the crosses more visible/ show more of the land/ move the moon higher etc (you get the drift).
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- Jan 12, 2010
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- 769
alright said:
main objective is distace the brightness of the moon =/
main objective is distace the brightness of the moon =/
Icon Reviewer
- Joined
- Jun 2, 2008
- Messages
- 8,912
More graves would be nice overlapping the moon.
- Joined
- Feb 2, 2010
- Messages
- 487
I'd put 2-3 more crosses, beneath the moon.
I realy understand this picture how it's suppost to work, and i realy think it does, awesome work ! 5/5 +rep.
I realy understand this picture how it's suppost to work, and i realy think it does, awesome work ! 5/5 +rep.
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2009
- Messages
- 697
Nice icon but the moon needs much more craters 
- Joined
- Sep 11, 2009
- Messages
- 1,812
yep, looks good but fixe things that people said.
- Joined
- Aug 8, 2009
- Messages
- 888
Indeed, the above suggestions would be a good improvement. At first I thought it was a pearl, it was so shiny.
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- Jan 12, 2010
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- 769
Nice icon but the moon needs much more craters
The craters of the moon can not be seen from Earth without a telescope.
Unfortunately I do not think that should change the number of crosses.
Will change only the brightness of the moon
- Joined
- Feb 2, 2010
- Messages
- 487
Okaysy, icon's concept is still vissible and it's result is awesome.
Already gave you rep for this one :3
Already gave you rep for this one :3
- Joined
- Jan 21, 2007
- Messages
- 2,013
A little more shadows are visible though:
I think that you should add at least 1 more(bigger) cross or make the current ones bigger. They are hardly visible now, so the cemetary effect is lost. They don't have to bemuch bigger, just a little.
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- Jan 12, 2010
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- 769
Not a true picture of the moon ... It's a drawing LoL
Who did the picture could put much of shade wished
Who did the picture could put much of shade wished
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- Jan 21, 2007
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- 2,013
Who said that it was a real picture?
And who cares if it's a drawing or not, it still shows you that a shining moon isn't plain white.
And who cares if it's a drawing or not, it still shows you that a shining moon isn't plain white.
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- Jan 12, 2010
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The picture is not real.
Funny, when I look at the moon looks nothing like this picture
Funny, when I look at the moon looks nothing like this picture
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- Jan 21, 2007
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I could say the same about your moon. Fine, it's not like I'm forcing you or anything.
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- Jan 12, 2010
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Rate 3/5, childish attitude .... = /
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- Jan 21, 2007
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Childish attitude? I don't give 4/5 or 5/5 to icons I don't find deserve it. That's why I wait to rate icons until the author has decided not to make any more changes. To me, this is a 3/5, nothing more.
Learn to take critics, otherwise you will never be able to make something good.
Learn to take critics, otherwise you will never be able to make something good.
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- Jan 12, 2010
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I never said it would not make more changes ....
I said I'm not changing anything you said, mainly by giving as an example not real picture.
I get very well the criticisms and suggestions provided they have good ideas.
I said I'm not changing anything you said, mainly by giving as an example not real picture.
I get very well the criticisms and suggestions provided they have good ideas.
- Joined
- Jun 16, 2009
- Messages
- 247
looks like a simple snow ball, golf ball.. define it more.. maybe resize the moon and expose the graveyard.. btw that's a good concept
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- Jan 12, 2010
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alright updated,
read the changelog
read the changelog
- Joined
- Aug 8, 2009
- Messages
- 888
Last update was a great improvement. I still think the moon is very bright, but it's quite a bit better.
- Joined
- Jun 17, 2008
- Messages
- 550
I like the improvements made
- Joined
- Jan 21, 2007
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- 2,013
The improved version looks much better, good enough to change my rating to a 4/5. I'm still not too fond of the moon, but now that it's smaller the shading looks more appropriate.
It does a good job of visualising the concept now.
It does a good job of visualising the concept now.
- Joined
- Feb 4, 2009
- Messages
- 3,172
Remove the bright outline from the bottom part of the graves. They make no sense, if light is coming from above/behind.
