09:32, 4th Oct 2015
Apheraz Lucent: A very nice alteration of the original icon. Looks good!

Here is the wip:

What program did you used in making this icon??


Also this is a lot better compare to your last similar icon

Gimp 2

You should remove those lasers, they look awful. It would look better without them.

A Void said:

You should remove those lasers, they look awful. It would look better without them.

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They're strings.. not lasers

They look too thick to be strings, anyway you should just remove them or upload a second variation.

I already updated it yesterday.

The main problem seems to be that there's too much glow(or rather too accentuated) and not enough texture.
Especially on the brain since that's the main focus of your icon.

Also you might want to tweak the brain proportion a bit.
It seems slightly smaller than it should be.

The hand looks fine though

A Void said:

They look too thick to be strings, anyway you should just remove them or upload a second variation.

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Yeah but isn't it quite obvious since the name of the icon has "mind control" in it?

great