13:15, 13th Jul 2009
zombie2279: Basically, it's some blue liquid in a black beer bottle. Not exactly the most accurate concept for a mana potion, in my opinion, but let's leave it.

The bottle itself would need more details. Add scratches, markers, more accurate light reflections, whatever you feel necessary. A plug on top would also do good. Also take into account, that hawk's review is somewhat accurate and the color schemes really don't harmonise. Try choosing a light blue for the background and make the bottle transparent.

9:12, 15th Jul 2009
zombie2279: Enough changes are made, but it could be better. We discussed it via VMs.

looks more like a bottle of wine :\

I think you should rename it to something else and change the color of the liquid. Because if you ever seen a gray beer/vine/vodka/whisky or anything than please tell me because i would love to try that out xD. Good shading with the bottle.Also the liquid seems a litle grainy ? Maybe it could be a bottle of gun powder if you would darken it a litle. Oh and you must change the background, in my opinion it doesn't fit with it at all.

-Somnium

It is very improvelable, but the quality is good.
2/5

Hmmm you should use another form for a poition.

it has a nice shading,lacks highlights on the bottle
4/5

The liquid could be a bit brighter and the white outline could be improved because if you look at the bottom of the bottle its out of perspective.

So your gonna update it?

'kay.

The glow looks un-related and bad compared to the colour/function of the bottle. The bottle itself, the shading is un-realistic, and too dark.

So, glow needs to make sense and bottle needs to be more defined

Change the name, it`s not mana potion ;P And the blue part is not visible at all. It`s too dark for me.

It's rather basic. Too bland. If you could make the bottle look more...mystic? It would look better.

If you don't want to change the bottle design, try changing to liquid to red, so its more like wine.

RoleplayingKing said:

It's rather basic. Too bland. If you could make the bottle look more...mystic? It would look better.

If you don't want to change the bottle design, try changing to liquid to red, so its more like wine.

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Yes, you could make it red and call it wine, or you change the bottle form.

Much better!

5/5 for this , I think it's perfect now.

Now it looks really good. 4/5

too coolXD 3.5/5 +rep(oh right.....)

SnaKy said:

looks more like a bottle of wine :\

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Blue Wine
Mmm Thanks for this I needed it!

Nice icon i will use this

Very nice...it kinda looks like the Amnesty International logo

Very good looking potion (like the others)!

5/5 !!!