23:04, 6th Sep 2010
Pyramidhe@d: Useful

High quality.

I don't think it's been edited enough to be approved, but I JUST LOVE IT SOOOO MUCH.

Hmm, the blood shouldn't come down so far and maybe have it brighter on the top part of the hook itself (where it is really dark).

Arkon Kaos said:

I don't think it's been edited enough to be approved, but I JUST LOVE IT SOOOO MUCH.

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Soo. what exactly do you want me too add then.

For me it looks stranger than the older one. But you making a good work there.

Army-of-Pandas said:

Soo. what exactly do you want me too add then.

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Read the rest of my comment.

Yes, but thats just minor adjustment, ill see what happends.

I dont like the big "stream" of blood, and I dont like how there is no blood on the front of the hook, The tip is the wound point after all.

Well if there wasn't the stream of blood then the icon would have no point.

No what i meant is theres too much blood in a straight line.
This is what I mean.

The one on the left is similar to yours (except i stupidly made a sickle and not a hook) and the right is sort of what I want you to do.
EDIT- Also, after looking at it, could you also change the angle of the blood?

Because you current angle shows it hit with the left part in the picture, making it a blunt projectile. But if you angle the blood, the entry point would be the hook, and also you could move the whole image down, putting the hook in the middle, and putting less of the chain in the image, because to utilise this icon fully you'll have to use the other hook icon you made, meaning people will know that this is a hook.

Ok ill add more blood then.

I think you should think of the blood as a more solid thing than a spraying/cloudy thing. Think of splatters and such, like ink or paint being thrown and dragged. Atm the blood looks too cloudy (which doesnt make it look like blood) but the hook is really nice though..hmmm..

Kimberly said:

I think you should think of the blood as a more solid thing than a spraying/cloudy thing. Think of splatters and such, like ink or paint being thrown and dragged. Atm the blood looks too cloudy (which doesnt make it look like blood) but the hook is really nice though..hmmm..

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Hmm, ill see what i can do.

read the new originality rule. delete on of your hook and focus on the other. Also. golden-drake made a very similar looking icon. i suggest you do a good enough job to convince me to accept you icon over his