BTNfamasf1by137

Moderator · Nov 8, 2010

09:56, 10th Nov 2010
enjoy: The weapon looks like you have traced it. If you have, don't do that. Not freehand! But it lacks highlights and lots of shading anyways, and the weapon should be centered. It isn't right now. Also, I agree with midnighters. Never use white background. Black backgrounds are so more efficient. Just make some glow behind the weapon on a black background. Will make it look nicer.

enjoy: Very nice. Though it could use some more variation in shading and highlights, I think it is useful as it as, and I could see people using it like this.

Midnighters · Nov 8, 2010

Even if this is not CnP it is horrible, the white background makes the gun look like crap.

hashveen · Nov 8, 2010

Midnighters said:
Even if this is not CnP it is horrible, the white background makes the gun look like crap.

Wow arrogant much? if you got nothing nice to say why bother? i want some feedback from people to help me improve.. not a useless rant.

PlasmaSnake · Nov 8, 2010

In my opinon, you should get a closer picture of the gun as that this icon was mostly a background and not the gun. I'm sure that the gun looks well, but I could not really see it to know.

hashveen · Nov 8, 2010

PlasmaSnake said:
In my opinon, you should get a closer picture of the gun as that this icon was mostly a background and not the gun. I'm sure that the gun looks well, but I could not really see it to know.

alright thanks~ i'll try to improve on my next one.

crimson fire · Nov 8, 2010

hmm enlarge abit on the gun so it will be less backround and try changing the backround color to something else see if it looks better in other colors because to me it kinda blurs on the gun (i dont know how else to explain it), but still nice try

Midnighters · Nov 8, 2010

Maybe you should learn to read, I was telling you, the background makes it bad, a white background on an icon can rarely be pulled off. The gun just looks like a black blob right now.

Now, learn to not be such an asshole, and learn to read between the lines. I have read most of your posts, and they look assholish, because you keep saying to not say anything if you can't say anything nice.

I have my rights to say anything I damn well please, much the same as you. I have more approved icons that you, and I am pretty sure I know what I m talking about.

Mainy · Nov 8, 2010

Bwtter than another, but poorly done.

GhostThruster · Nov 9, 2010

Hehe, Midnighters... always getting angry, always getting sweary... (I remember your posts in my Inv system).

However, you must learn to take criticism. The background is not good. Change it to black, and just outline the gun with a small white brush. Really, I still don't see why you're doing gun icons. A whole pack has been made by Zombie, they are much better quality(no offense) and you should focus on easy icons before moving onto guns(as they can be quite detailed).

hashveen · Nov 9, 2010

Midnighters said:
Maybe you should learn to read, I was telling you, the background makes it bad, a white background on an icon can rarely be pulled off. The gun just looks like a black blob right now.

Now, learn to not be such an asshole, and learn to read between the lines. I have read most of your posts, and they look assholish, because you keep saying to not say anything if you can't say anything nice.

I have my rights to say anything I damn well please, much the same as you. I have more approved icons that you, and I am pretty sure I know what I m talking about.

I know your such an artist and yours is better and such.. but at least don't be so arrogant..and alright i'll try to redo it when i can..

GhostThruster said:
Hehe, Midnighters... always getting angry, always getting sweary... (I remember your posts in my Inv system).

However, you must learn to take criticism. The background is not good. Change it to black, and just outline the gun with a small white brush. Really, I still don't see why you're doing gun icons. A whole pack has been made by Zombie, they are much better quality(no offense) and you should focus on easy icons before moving onto guns(as they can be quite detailed).

Yeah i know mine sucks to hell but i couldn't find a famas icon from zombie so i figured trying it out.. for the ak.. it was a challange to myself

Midnighters · Nov 9, 2010

Ghost, it's worse now, I am trying to keep my anger to a dull roar, but my emotions are all fucked up. I am sorry for getting angry, and I was by no means being "arrogant".

hashveen · Nov 9, 2010

Midnighters said:
Ghost, it's worse now, I am trying to keep my anger to a dull roar, but my emotions are all fucked up. I am sorry for getting angry, and I was by no means being "arrogant".

Its ok.. we all have our problems.. in our life..well what happen has passed right? so we cool now.. right?

Midnighters · Nov 9, 2010

Yeah, till I slip up again.

GhostThruster · Nov 11, 2010

Holy crap...alot better. May I suggest zooming on the weapon, and you still haven't highlighted the small details on the gun (unless you did this silhouette style on purpose).

darkdeathknight · Nov 11, 2010

Try putting the gun in a diagonal position, to maximise the area.

hashveen · Nov 11, 2010

GhostThruster said:
Holy crap...alot better. May I suggest zooming on the weapon, and you still haven't highlighted the small details on the gun (unless you did this silhouette style on purpose).

Hey thanks.. yeah i sorta forgotten bout some of the details.. i'll work on it thanks

darkdeathknight said:
Try putting the gun in a diagonal position, to maximise the area.

Will do~

epsilon · Nov 14, 2010

it fits with my model..!!! i really like it
+rep

hashveen · Nov 14, 2010

epsilon said:
it fits with my model..!!! i really like it
+rep

Thanks

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