01:10, 5th Jan 2014
Kimbo: Although I agree generally with the comments below, I think regardless this still looks like a nice icon and the style is well done. It looks great when compressed as an icon and I can see many uses for this. approved.

Doesn't look very good in the normal size... BUT when converted to the icon size, its really useful and nice. can be used for an undead buff or smth...

The shape of the chest looks very bad. Also the fire isn´t very good. Try to remake it.

Yeah it's hard to see the 'fire'
Probably if you want it burning maybe you need some charred bone parts?

it's hard too understand what is going on and why, what is the need for a burning chest (a burning skull or weapon has more meaning. this has the same meaning as a burning thigh bone, none its just totally random object), surely a debuff? perhaps show a ball of fire inside (implying pain) or imply that its the inner fire of undead if it's for a buff, and have it looking like an aura around the entire unit (ie the Skull, shoulders bones and ribs as a minimum with flames coming off them). The pose looks like its been copied directly from a biology text book giving it no real impact.

I could show the shoulders but I should make it smaller, and It can be small. I try to fix the problem.
In fact in the real which I did draw, I showed the shoulders.