19:14, 19th Jul 2014
Orcnet: My comment

I will.

Map Description - Templates
by -Kobas-

Short review Hurrrr...


- Fix the minimap preview. Make sure it has the correct filepath (war3mapPreview.tga) and correct file type. Note the capitalized P in preview and the .tga filetype.

(Note before reading the rest of the review: I used iseedeadpeople. No whining about that pls.)

- There's barely enough space to move a couple of units. Let alone an army of two players. The base at the top has way too much space and I'd suggest you utilize that space.


- You're using the default AI which is stupid in custom made maps. I won't blame them about not being able to reach my base though, the portal in their base doesn't seem to be a two way portal. (Refer to Next attachment and text)


- As I've said. The portal doesn't seem to be a two way portal. I way testing stuff so I made my hero go to the portal. At first it didn't seem to work so I tried right clicking the portal. After a few tries, it probably worked since my hero was moved to the next portal. However, I wasn't able to do that again... Soo... my hero got stuck there and died a miserable death with the undead and their stupid towers.

- Everything seems to be destructible? Again as I was testing stuff, I found out that the walls can be targeted via attack ground of the mortar team, so.. I made myself a Grand entrance and surprised the undead.

- Overall, for me, this is a melee map with custom units & doodads and super small space with preplaced buildings & units. You might have meant to add a storyline of your own but heck I don't get any plot at all here.

- Credit the people who made the models.
- Credit the people who made the models.
- Credit the people who made the models.
- Credit the people who made the models. That can't be said enough. I did not see any trace of credits at all but I could see these particular custom models being used in the game. (and BTW, I won't take "Authors were hard to find" excuse because I found these rather quickly.) http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/demonobelisk-155836/ , http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/forsaken-catapult-243517/ , http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/slaughteredvillager-245133/ , and http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/witch-king-252177/

Finally, I'd vote for rejection with a rating of 2/5. But if you fix these things, I'm sure I can increase the rating.

EDIT: It looks like my screenshots has that weird transparent space at the bottom. Magos conversion issue? :/

hey this map does not even make sense add some events to make it more challenging improve description also...

If you want to get more different models try to go to Chaosrealm okay

Alright, it looks like you have updated your map to fix some of the things I've mentioned so I'll just increase my rating then.

Could you add some screenshots?

Map

Uploaded.

Not bad, it need better terrain i think, and their is no victory message when i killed the final boss

The map is made more of spammed units and structures rather than giving it a game play. Terrain is clustered and looks like a quick make up.

AIs are not working so you end up just rushing the whole units and straight to the target hero/unit and games doesn't even end.

The game is quite a boost for practice, but not an acceptable use for upload. You may see tutorials or map development for you to learn more in making a decent map, for now its more of just practice.