19:58, 22nd Oct 2009
The_Reborn_Devil:

I would recommend using Triggering Unit instead of Casting Unit.
Also, instead of a rate at 1000000000 use 0 which is instant.
I would also suggest making the axes deal damage when they hit and not only over time. It looks kinda bugged like that.
The rest looks good as far as I can see and the spell is quite nice.
Status: Approved.
Rating: Useful.

very nice rmx +rep ^^

very nice rmx +rep ^^

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Well i was thinking of making this spell, Axes On Fire against you in the challenge but i got really easy on you lol.

BS EASY u made a pheonix that flies ._. btw you should upload that spell here.

good triggering and the sfx is ok too. 4/5
but why you don't use a real timer?
(the spell looks like yearight's meteor shield) :/

BS EASY u made a pheonix that flies ._. btw you should upload that spell here.

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Well i am making a Spellpack with it lol, going to post it +3 other spells

Don't double post Rmx... I'm checking

not bad not bad double poster

well thought I'm a little concerned about one thing, why are there no impact damage? they hit and then they deal damage over time that comes one second later. It looks like the damage is delayed but it issn't if you know the triggering

also triggering unit is faster then casting

else I have no cons to say thought it shouldnt be needed

To Baassee ... still waiting for your spellpack.

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LAWL you'll see it maybe tomorrow or on friday

Removed the Double post lol sorry for that.


Thnx Bassee for the Review +REP

A bit imbalanced, but a great idea and it works really nice, thou it kills my old PC if i cast it 2 times in a row, and none of axes isn't hitting anything :<

Really nice special effect with axes that blue tail is a nice touch ^^

As I said to weak at first level and to imbalanced on last.

If you could do some "axe counter" like limit of 3-4 axes per unit. You know what I mean?

But still as it is 5/5

~Berz

well Rmx baassee said it all, and here's some more:


Switch this:

• If (All Conditions are True) then do (Then Actions) else do (Else Actions)
  • If - Conditions
    • AW_Angle[AW] Greater than or equal to 359.00
  • Then - Actions
    • Set AW_Angle[AW] = 0.00
  • Else - Actions

With:

• If (All Conditions are True) then do (Then Actions) else do (Else Actions)
  • If - Conditions
    • AW_Angle[AW] Greater than or equal to 360.00
  • Then - Actions
    • Set AW_Angle[AW] = (AW_Angle[AW] - 360.00)
  • Else - Actions

And Rmx it's about time you start dealing with X & Y rather than points...

But amazing job! And why do I have a strange feeling BZK has something to do with it

But amazing job! And why do I have a strange feeling BZK has something to do with it

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Lol how did u know .. i putted him on the CREDITS ... he suggest some nice effects +REP

THNX BerZeKeR .... +REP SPECIAL EFFECTS MASTER

Well now you know how I knew, the special effects ;D

*off-topic*

/me shy

Yeah, as baassee stated, impact damage would be nice

Yupp you can add impact damage and then decrease over-time damage (you still want to keep things balanced)

Ok then i will do what both of you suggested ... thnx ... updating tomorrow hopefully

haha just the thing with the impact damage is that there is a impact SFX but nothing happen and one sec later it pop up a float

Ya i know i will fix that lol

hmm i like the spell its quite usefull and that setup in triggers is quite good!
i have casted this spell 4x times at same time and its MUI but it caused lag :S massive lag
there where no units around me so that was quite some amount of movement anyway there is not to much u can do to fix that in GUI!

the part i like the most in this spell is just simple its movement and that blue trail coz its different then other spells (usually)

and about that no damage impact well it already was told

k i dont want to bother u but here is a little math tutor!

• If (All Conditions are True) then do (Then Actions) else do (Else Actions)
  • If - Conditions
    • AW_Angle[AW] Greater than or equal to 359.00
  • Then - Actions
    • Set AW_Angle[AW] = 0.00
  • Else - Actions

that is same as:

• Set AW_Angle[AW] = (AW_Angle[AW] mod 360.00)

and that line:

• Animation - Change AW_Dummy[AW] flying height to AW_Height[AW] at 1000000000.00

well instead of using that large number 100...
use 0 instead coz t ~ 1/rate but since we cant write unlimited we shall say that t ~ rate
and so it means that if rate is 0 and 1/0 is unlimited it will reach given height instantly! thats how we handle unlimited in computer workd


now i must be careful coz Deuterium might rape me for this

anyway quite good coded GUI spell for now +rep
~Dark Dragon

As always, quite decent and indeed exceptional.
In case you already fixed the minor flaw i mentioned in Chat, the one with flying units, "great"!
Otherwise, "very good".

Thnx Dark Dragon for the great Equation and help +REP .

Thnx Paladon for reviewing my spell and commenting on it +REP **MUST SPREAD SOME REP lol** ..

Hey RMX Nice spell. Good documentation too.

Seem leakless i just picked up this from the Axes of Wonders ON trigger:

Variables
AW_Point[0] : (Line: 28) Location - Removed: Yes
AW_Point[1] : (Line: 47) Location - Removed: Yes
AW_Dummy[AW_Times] : (Line: 49) Unit Group - Removed: No
AW_SpecialEffect1[AW_Times] : (Line: 52) Unit Group - Removed: No
AW_SpecialEffect2[AW_Times] : (Line: 54) Unit Group - Removed: No

Edit: oh btw 5/5

And remember...only YOU can prevent spell leaks. lulz

Well my spell is LEAKLESS ... i am .. sure coz i destroyed the special effects in the Axes loop spell ... and the dummy unit well it is a GLOGBAL

oooooooh. Well then I must get a new leak check ^^

lulz

of course it was leakless, good spell maker would not release his spells unless it was completely leakless and efficient.

of course it was leakless, good spell maker would not release his spells unless it was completely leakless and efficient.

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Thank you Septi, +REP for Septi

@ f0rsAk3n:
Leak checks are stupid... learn how to check for leaks yourself

Dark_Dragon said:

now i must be careful coz Deuterium might rape me for this

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HAHAHAHAHA! Ohh man you made me laugh my ass off!

and Rmx, DD gave you a better method of fixing the 360 thing using remainders which is actually a very smart idea ;D


@ Dark_Dragon:
Once I was trying my "talent" with mathematical limits, so when I divided by zero it ended up giving me an annoying bold red message in-game saying something like:
"Warning: Dividend by zero in Trig_Action...."

Dark_Dragon said:

there where no units around me so that was quite some amount of movement anyway there is not to much u can do to fix that in GUI!

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Well the lag wasn't massive on my pc, but yes there was some on spam!
But wouldn't the usage of X & Y instead of points decrease the lag a bit?
Or it just doesn't matter here since the dummies already don't have any orders, and so no orders are being intercepted?

Septimus said:

of course it was leakless, good spell maker would not release his spells unless it was completely leakless and efficient.

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So, am I a good one? =D

Deuterium said:

and so no orders are being intercepted?

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I think so thought not sure ...

Well, now for all I know using X & Y are definitely much more efficient in all cases, but I don't know if it'll make that much of a difference for the lag...
And either way, if Rmx is to use X & Y he's going to have to adjust all the actions which contain points into Custom Scripts, so I'm not sure if that would be done...

+ I don't think anyone would be using this spell for more than one unit and I think the cool-down is going to be high enough for it to run only once at a time, so I believe there's no need to adjust it.
+ The number of axes won't necessarily be 9, and the less the number of axes the less the lag

nah you dont always need custom script for x/y just convert coords to points thought I get what you mean with the custom thingie.

Also more effiecenty would result in better game play thought it only makes it faster and I agree dunno about the lagg issue

Well thank you for all your comments, but i do not use X and Y in this spell, i only use a typical GUI .

If someone can teach me how to move a unit on X & Y in GUI, OFC PM, i will gladly make it.

Also i tried one time in a jump spell, but turned out when i cast the ability the hero jumps from the center of the map lol.

PS - I know vJASS but it is much much easier to use X & Y in it

EDIT !!!! : The LAGG issue is spamming alot of the axes, 9 AXES ! is fine, but 18 or 27 is ALOT !, and did you try them at level 3, 4 axes are just fine ...

Spam Level 5 and down ... this will not lagg as level 9 !

Well baassee, if you change coord to point then you're using the point and we're trying to avoid that

Rmx, you can't do that in GUI, but instead you need some Custom Scripts, and some basic math on graphs (2D in this case)...

EDIT:
I'd help you with that if you want me to, but now until night...
And I think we need to check first if it would actually reduce the lag that much or not, before we start

that's because you are moving so many stuff at the exactly the same time :S works better in vJass

also about the X/Y

had the same issue, thoguht I fixed it. You set a point / coords to a point, example caster point which you'd set that point into the position. The thing is that if you remove the caster point and still uses the first point, it results in a very common problem, everything happen in the center of the map because the script have a point that is set to a point that doesnt even exist

thought you maybe had another issue but thats your problem now

Well then i will do this spell in VJASS but it will need me to make it like 5 days :O

EDIT Baassee : That is completely right this was my problem thank you

Rmx said:

EDIT Baassee : That is completely right this was my problem thank you

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I'm just glad to help

Well yes vJass is much better Rmx... but why 5 days? Gonna spend some time readin tutorials ehh? =O

Well yes vJass is much better Rmx... but why 5 days? Gonna spend some time readin tutorials ehh? =O

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Well i will be reading not just one but 500 ! to make it work in vJASS

not bad

not bad

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Lol thnx i was planning to make that spell against Aaron79 but i got really easy on him ...

you must enter your best spells to win

Rmx said:

not just one but 500

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Hahaha

Rmx said:

Well i will be reading not just one but 500 !

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you are a sick man! (or girl)

you are a sick man! (or girl

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Well how did u know i am a girl, just kidding i am a man

Maybe you areeee... *looks at the ceiling*

Maybe you areeee... *looks at the ceiling*

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Lol MANYAKE well enuff off topic.

OFF TOPIC :

I just released my official spell against Palaslayer in our challenge

gief me a VM when you fix the impact damage really wanna have this spell in my map ^^

The spell is awesome, but sometimes it hit friendly units and buildings, please fix that! =) THANKS

Amazing spell I'd say!
I give it... 5/5 points!
If you want the full review, please ask me for it.