14:58, 7th Jun 2008
Pyritie: Not a bad start... I have a bunch of suggestions though. (1) Instead of particles, use ribbons. Or at least fix the particles' alpha and don't make them float upwards. (2) Instead of just a blue ball for the nucleus, what about protons/neutrons? (3) The nucleus and electrons are pretty high-poly at the moment.

Fix these and I'll approve it.

13th Jun 2008
Pyritie: MUCH better.

I will make an icon soon.

What are you supposed to used for, som strange item, a spell or somthing else?

Can be used in a map as an tech item(gives you upgrades or something)

Okay, an other thing, i don't even think that atom exist, i mean 3 electrones in the other shell?

There is no need to be a real one.

It looks very good i belive

I like it, very nice idea. +Rep if I could.

The size of the nucleus and the electrons are greatly exagurated, considering this is a scale model with the right distances.

Billboarded planes ftw... Use them.
--donut3.5--

Make a quark next! Dey time travel!

This is just lol

That's a really unstable atom
Carbon-0 +6, haha.

Didn't we learn that electrons move in clouds now?
Anyways, those electrons are much too large compared to the nucleic particles.

This is brings a smile to my day. But the day's almost over. Should have found this first. Drat.

maybe you could make the particles as own model to make us able to choose how much particles we want (skill: Sphere)

Awesome representation of the atom, Not only does it show the protons in the nucleus but also shows electrons orbiting as in the electron shells. Nice job, 5/5 and I will use it. Use it when studying Chemistry 101

Should be much much much smaller but 5/5 for brilliant idea

Again, use billboarded planes to reduce the file size by like 9001%

TheTerran said:

Awesome representation of the atom, Not only does it show the protons in the nucleus but also shows electrons orbiting as in the electron shells. Nice job, 5/5 and I will use it. Use it when studying Chemistry 101

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Someone needs to review their chemistry
Nuclei can't stay together without Neutrons and Electrons are 1800 times smaller than Protons!

I think there is an icon.

You must be wrong or i didn't made it

Hmm.. Like many others lately, a very "different" model. But still very useful. But I suggest fixing your nucleus so that there is an even # of protons and neutrons. (Looks more basic) Maybe change the color so you can tell the difference between the protons and neutrons. And as a final detail, shrink your electrons to mere specks but add like 20 more. >.>

I'm thinking of making the electrons a bit smaller and the protons and neutrons bigger

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Pros:

Original. VERY original.
Did I mention original?
It works.

Cons:

That bubble thing... is very ugly!
No neutrons D:

4/5.

Looks lovely.

Offtopic: I was wondering if you could make a chemistry glass, you know a test tube. Have searched around here and I'm surprised no one has made/submitted one.

Cool^^ What a about Particle accelerator )

I know exactly what to use it for!!!

Atomic research! This is absolutely perfect for my map +rep.

Would be pretty if there were traces (is that the right word?) behind the electrons. Or are there? 'Cause I see them on the screenshot but not with War3 Model Editor.

looks awesome, but I dont think this kinda usefull