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Orcnet: fix description
Orcnet: fix description
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(2)Swamp
- Author(s)
- ~DARK~
- Size
- 45.8 KB
- Rating
- Downloads
- 14
- Created
- May 22, 2013
- Updated
- May 22, 2013
- Resources
- 1
- State
Approved
This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
This My First Map . I Hope You Like The Terrain . If The Terrain is Bad Please Tell me To Make Better Terrain in My Other Maps .
Map Info :
4 Green Camps
2 Orange Camps
1 Red Camp
As I Said Its My First Time Terraing And I Will Grow in Future . Have Fun With it
Credits :
-SpoX-
Map Info :
4 Green Camps
2 Orange Camps
1 Red Camp
As I Said Its My First Time Terraing And I Will Grow in Future . Have Fun With it
Credits :
-SpoX-
Contents
Reviews
- Joined
- Sep 2, 2012
- Messages
- 308
Reserved
~Reserved ^Zealot Is Me^
~Reserved ^Zealot Is Me^
- Joined
- Nov 29, 2012
- Messages
- 6,637
I would really like to review this but for now not because I would give this a rating of 1/5 and voting for Rejection.... Your melee for first timer is quite bad. Let me point you some bad things:
-Your spawn location for the bases seems to bug. Both Player 1 and 2 spawned at the same location. I suggest put each spawn location to different place. Also the spawn location for your building are quite near to neutral hostiles that makes it attack them your base.
-Your terrain is really bad. Your map is quite open... yes, I did say open but not that open. There should be still some trees to block areas and you have quite a few neutral and all sides are full of neutral hostiles. Where could players even spawn when it is full of creeps?
-Your terrain is flat. You should use Raise/Lower Tools to make different levels to the ground.
-Your terrain once again is really empty. I only see few doodads on the creeps areas and in the open area, nothing.....
-The placing of gold mines are quite bad.
-There is not even a shop or maybe fountains.
Sorry but you should improve this map for now.
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- Sep 2, 2012
- Messages
- 308
Ok I Will Improve it Thanks For Your Review Bro 
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you can read much info at the http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/map-development-202/map-submission-rules-228244/, it will help you make a decent map description
for now 'NEEDS FIX' then pm me once you are done
for now 'NEEDS FIX' then pm me once you are done
- Joined
- Nov 29, 2012
- Messages
- 6,637
Ok I Will Improve it Thanks For Your Review Bro
No problem, just review some more Melee map tutorials and you will learn alot. If you want, I can send you some tutorials through PMs? Of course, tutorial by other users.
