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Map Review

1) Terrain - Good (4)
2) Trigger -
3) Minor Error - Bad (2)
4) Major Error - Excellent (5)
5) Replay Value - Average (3)
6) Fun factor/gameplay - Average (3)
7) Use of imported material -
8) Single player - Average (3)
9) AI support -
10) Camera -
11) Originality - Average (3)
12) File Size - Excellent (5)
13) Internet/LAN Friendly -
14) Balancing - Good (4)
15) Packaging - Bad (2)
16) Credits -
17) Storyline - Average (3)
18) Theme -
19) Protection - Excellent (5)
20) Quality - Good (4)
21) Description/Information/Detail - Bad (2)
22) Hiveworkshop rules & regulation - Excellent (5)
23) Game Mode -
24) Function -
25) Unit Placement - Average (3)

Total Accumulation Point : 56/80 * 100 + (-12) (Review) = 58

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[-] - Unit placement have a minor error at red starting location. I notice there is a few tree that separate the creep within the player 1 base, try add another 1 or 2 layer of tree.
[-] - Lot's of typo error at your map storyline.
[-] - Gold distribution doesn't seem to be balance. The amount of gold is too much for both of the player especially for 1 vs 1 map. Gold resources should between 10,000-20,000 for each player and alternate gold mine is 10,000-15,000 for duel match.
[-] - Water terrain lack of the life like feeling, try add something like frog and lily pad.

Review : Well, it seems to be a decent melee map for me.

But, you need to fix those typo error of your map storyline. It not only make your packaging look bad, but it make the storyline sound lame as if they are created by small kid who are just 6 years old. Melee map doesn't only depends on how good the terrain look all the time, but sometimes the storyline/description of the map could be crucial as well if you want to appease people to download it.

Another -12 point for this map.

Septimus Score System

Awful: 1-10
Unacceptable : 11-30
Lacking : 31-49
Useful : 50-69
Recommend : 70-90
Highly Recommend : 91-100
Director Cut : 101-105
Sub-Zero : 106+

Rating & Miscellaneous information

Score - 58/100
Rating - 3/5
Condition - Good
Status - Approve
Review - 1

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