20:35, 28th Dec 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

The map is too imbalanced:

• Only blue has free access to a tavern (red has to cross enemy territory).
• Neutral guard towers aren't really 'done' in melee maps (idem for riflemen, footmen etc).
• Blue can defend a choke point right next to a fountain of health.
• Although the right expansion is harder to assault with ground units, air units can easily harass workers without too much danger.
• Weird creep placements (example: bottom left marketplace).

you forgot stones, grass, birds, water effects....

Thanks for the tip, i will be on my way : )

Edit: Maps terrain improved in version 1.1

Seems a little unbalanced: Blue is close to a couple goldmines while red is not.

Patrick14568 said:

Seems a little unbalanced: Blue is close to a couple goldmines while red is not.

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I want to disagree with you. I measured the distance and red is closer to the right side gold mine than blue. But blues goldmine that is at the bottom is closer than to reds left gold mine. Still the fact that red has better defensive stances to choose from.

Terrain looks good 4/5

Thanks for rating, gonna update screenshot after my 1.2 version of this map!

Many mispelled words in your description

Description: The drop lake was a peacfull place... Untill the war came. People were crushed. So did the guards join the villages to pretoect them.


You should fix the description first its hard to read. Thats a poor attempt at spelling a simple word like protect. This is peaceful, until... Try a dictionary or spell checker. I'm sure you can find one online. It would just make your description look a lot better

PS: Try moving the gold mines closer to the corners of the map most people will be annoyed by the imbalance of the resources regardless of the tactical advantage of the starting locations.