In your dream you insane patientYou are welcome to buy me a scanner -Peper-
But seriously, that was quite over the line. Those are the type of statements that ruin entire plots and storylines. Don't do this type of thing again.
If its just that, its fine with me, as long as I won't any mistakes again, yeah.
Arena is in the citadel. And citadel is supposed to be FAR FAR AWAY from the battlefield, dunno how guys appear and reappear there.
Second problem. Yeah we are building a story, not telling how superpower our character are.
There's too many battle in an instant :I
Nope. There's nothing wrong with having multiple situations and stories going on simultaneously. It's just that some of our posts are sometimes too vague, or too blurry. So others misinterpret the story and their story get's wrong as well. Basically, everyone is confused at what is happening right now and where and how everyone's situation is.
I was just stating an example. What I was trying to say is that when, in one post a character get's a super duper mega uber weapon of godliness, then it makes it seem like that this super duper uber weapon seems very easy to obtain. Dividing it or lengthening it to several posts makes it more interesting and also more, in a sense "deserving" to get.
Again. Not one by one, but we should just post what idea we have of the current situation right now. I think some people, like myself, are just confused. Like a big confused mess that needs to be organized.
Arcisal said:
Warning, incoming wall of text about something irrelevant to some.
Generally, I agree with you in most stuff, Arcisal, because you are a talented storyteller, and you know it. But I have to put up my opinion here, about character-creation.
Whenever a character is created, a good writer would describe the character, as much as possible. Describe the looks and the personality (personality being the most important in my opinion), even describing the smells or the feelings of the character can sometimes be a good thing.
I have seen, in this RP as well as in other RPs, how some players love creating characters. And yes, it is very fun, to create a character, but it must be done correctly, 'cuz the character that is being created, will become a toy for all of us to play with later on.
Right now, I can't play with the new toys/I can't use the new characters.
Why?
Because they haven't been made correctly, they haven't been described as good as they should have. Thus, I don't understand them, and the result is that I can't use them in my plot, and I will try to avoid them, until the damage has been repaired.
My point being, that if you are a good writer and is able to make two characters correctly at once, it's fine by me, but do not create new characters if your old characters still lack some of the points I mentioned above. And there are a lot of people who are not good writers, or just new to this kind of RPs.
That's also one of the reasons I made the "Only one character every fifth chapter"-rule. But again, I've been in this from the start and I've only created 3 characters, simply because I have decided myself when I was ready to create a new, and I believe my characters are some of the most well-explained in the RP - that's better than having 10 silly characters with no background story, in my opinion.
Maybe someone takes this hardly, but please don't! It's just my opinion, which I decided to share. Learn from it, and keep cool
-Peper- (126) said:
clockwork2 (127) said:
Oh...Okay then. I completely get it!It's just like creating your own fantasy world. You build the geography, write the story, create the characters, do whatever you want! If done right, it can become amazing. Essentially, it's like your own little hidden world, that only you known of.
Some people like to do this through writing, or drawing, like myself. You can sketch the creatures of this fictional world, create the places and draw out the various scenes and stories. Others like using a website, where anyone can see what they've done. Some people which I know of even use various animated short films, where they explain and display their own world through videos and cinematics. Some even use games. I know a guy who made his own tiny little 3D game, no larger than 150 mb in size, where you could play as a man and can interact with the people of this game, do some small tasks. Far from complete though, but it looks astounding.
Azeroth is a fictional world, but it was made for a game not to express. Other examples are the world of Dragonlance, the galaxies of Starcraft and a very good example is J.R.R Tolkien's Arda, the place where Lord of the Rings took place in. Arda is a great example because, unlike the other examples, it was made not for money or for personal gain, but because Tolkien wanted to express himself and his ideas. You could go extremely deep with this, detailing every aspect of it.
It's a form of expression, basically. Just depends on what medium you use to express your ideas.
I think she is with Claira as they are together as one body, so yeah.Is there anyone else I'm missing? Apparently what I missed just made me confused even more. Hope some could explain this!
