Death Carnival

[Moderator]

23:47, 28th Apr 2013
Orcnet: stunning map! but you have to make up a quest menu showing how to play, changelogs, updates, and credits, overall good map

 

[Daffa]

Improve the description, use Map Description Generator.

 

[AwzomeWulfzz]

Improve the description, use Map Description Generator.

I perfectly understand the description. He doesn't need to improve it. And it doesn't look like a huge wall of text that nobody wants to read. On-topic: This map is pretty awesome. The gore, was also awesome. Just 5/5. Edit: More Stuff: Nice add on the cheats and AI commands. Will really be useful. Anyways, just like I said, 5/5.

 

[sonofjay]

Wow.. based on the screenshot the map looks very sexy.

 

[Tal'Rarity]

If it is a dropped project.. why not let others maybe work on it instead of protecting it? Looks like a fun map, will test later.

 

[Daffa]

I perfectly understand the description. He doesn't need to improve it. And it doesn't look like a huge wall of text that nobody wants to read. 5/5.

Well, I know its complete, but Rules are Rules, We don't want VK/Orcnet to reject it just because it lost the BB Codes.

 

[DENJ]

Wait. I`l improve the description, just dont`t reject it.

 

[DENJ]

Dat-C3, so the map could fall only into good hands, so we could decide in whose hands.

Nice add on the cheats and AI commands.

Actually those commands were made for us (developers) so we could easily test the map, not fo players ). Thanks for comment.

 

[Daffa]

Denj, please USE EDIT Button instead of double posting, I Will have it tested today if I can.

 

[Almia]

The map looks nice
It also features transparent doodads(first time to see this)
I'll give this some rep.

 

[UndeadImmortal]

Unable to play in multiplayer games, requires 2 teams to start.

 

[DENJ]

Unable to play in multiplayer games, requires 2 teams to start.

Sory about that. I fixed this problem and updated the map.

 

[sonofjay]

Well, I know its complete, but Rules are Rules, We don't want VK/Orcnet to reject it just because it lost the BB Codes.

Wow, talk about BS. Last time I check the description is fine. Why force the author to use too many bb codes and color if you can make a decent description without them?

Anyway the map looks awesome and I really had a lot of fun while playing it so i'm dropping a short review.

First of all the terrain design is just magnificent, it does look empty but it blends with the fast pace gameplay perfectly and the fact that you can jump on cliffs just gave me a orgasm.

About the gameplay its fun even though the ai is a little bit dumb but well its just a add-on. It will be a lot better though if you can add commands like roll, a grenade/first aid kit maybe? or give players a will to reload by themselves. Also the soldier runs too fast you should slow it down a little bit. Also i'm pretty sure that sound effects while shooting will give this map a lot of fun factor.

Also instead of showing your kills and death on the resource tab, you should make a multiboard for it. Also if you don't want to add a custom loading screen then at least put a description and your map name on the default loading screen. Oh oh also add a lobby description.

Well its alpha so this have a low chance to get approve. Its playable and fun though. 3/5 for now since its still a little bit unpolished.


EDIT:

Forgot about this but its a little bit important. Add a quest log with credits, map info or anything like instructions, plans etc.

 

[Daffa]

Map Review (Daffa the Mage)

Is the team issue pointed by UndeadImmortal fixed? if so, we will have a test for the whole map today.

Well, I don't care anymore about the description (I just don't wanna VK to reject it)

EDIT :

Me and UndeadImmortal have tested it and decide to give some review :

Bugs and Important Notes/Suggestions

[X]The text "PlayerName has accepted islam" is a bit offensive for some people, you can change it "PlayerName has killed himself"
[X]Add A Quest Log about how to play and Credits
[X]Give Characters name tag
[X]Give each weapon a name and some suggestion so we can use them properly
[X]Give a Target for player to finish the game

Epic Things that We Enjoy :
~AI Is challenging
~Great Graphic
~Amazing Terrain
~Its like a fresh game (sometime when we play, I think we play Counter-Strike, map resembles much of it)

I give this map 5/5 for its great ability, but please check my Suggestions

Sincerely,

Daffa the Mage

Little Hive Mage

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[DENJ]

Is the team issue pointed by UndeadImmortal fixed?

Yes.
Okey, I`ll add those things and reuploade the map.

EDIT:

I`ve done what you asked for, also added sound effects.

 

[Daffa]

Good Job, I'll give this one a rate of 5/5......... Oh Wait 6/5, DC Request and +Rep to the Author for this!!

 

[DENJ]

This looks so much like TcX it's not even funny.
I believe this has systems stolen from TcX without credit to Toadcop.

Do you think before posting? Tcx is a pity copy of Quake 3 and nothing more, and those "systems" as you calling them is just a basis of such genre. All games of this genre like Unreal Tournament, Quake, Counter Strike, Bloodmasters and other has such "systems". You click and the guy shoots. You shoot at someone and he falls dead. What other "systems" can be in online shooter? Or you don't even know what the online shooter is? It's a game genre, and this genre existed long time before tcx.
By the way tcx don't has walls and you can't click on bridges like in our map.

 

[deepstrasz]

All I have to report is that the terrain could be improved with more details, maybe explosives and whatnot. Another thing is that jumping or pushing may lead players to become stuck until death.