BTNJudgment

[Moderator]

16:22, 19th Mar 2015
Sin'dorei300: The blade needs a proper texture, atm it looks like it's made out of plastic.
Same applies for the handle.
The fire is too smudged and undefined.
I suggest u to improve the shading (from the perspective that u've chosen).

00:27, 25th Mar 2015
Sin'dorei300: No changes made.
Awaiting update.

 

[Moy]

Reserved

 

[Kingluis]

the right part of the sword handle is thinner than the left one, can you make it a bit larger?

and the sword becomes larger to the edge, when the oposite is what should happen (Even tho it does a funny effect)

 

[Moy]

and the sword becomes larger to the edge, when the oposite is what should happen (Even tho it does a funny effect)

Perspective.

 

[Heinvers]

The perspective is a bit strange tbh.

Retouching the handle might fix that. Nice one though

 

[Kingluis]

btw. DEMACIA!

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Perspective really is a little off, perhaps because the blade seems to curve instead of just go bigger in a sharp straight line. Blade looks plastic, metal should have heavy-duty shading to avoid that effect. And I'd love to see a few small wave strands in front of the sword as well, just to add to the overall effect of motion and fire. I do love the idea tho, and it looks nice so far, just needs a liiiitle more work to make it look "drawingly" correct

 

[Chaosy]

I see more than one flaw in this icon. (not that I can do better, lol)

The fire is okay, but I recall you had a fire icon back in the day that looked way better. The empty room between the blades is kinda undefined, at one part there is a really bright spot that looks bad. The blade also seem to be thicker and thicker rather than the opposite.

3.5/5 good potential.