Black Temple

[pasha]

please review my map

 

[Mgeterno11]

It looks cool and I like black citadel maps. However, you should improve your map's description, this will help you: Map Description - Templates You should add screenshots, too. The simplest way is to add your images to this post:

please review my map

And then click on the image, right click and then open in a new tab, then copy the link and paste it to the despription between these two codes:

And you should add more tilesets to the terrain and also more doodads.

Keep it up and good luck.

 

[PrinceYaser]

Hello, man! Here is my review:

• First of all about terrain ==> Terrain is lacking: 1. You did not use tile variation in the map 2. If you take a look at your map, You've blocked the way to the other part of the map and you must fix it.
• Second about doodads ==> You just used trees! You should use different types of doodads that fits with that tile to make the map looking much better!
• Third about creeps ==> The creep units should be placed on suitable places. For example you placed some of creep units in the main area of two goldmine.
• Fourth about tag of the map ==> You tagged this map as altered melee too, but this map is just melee! (Although you've created an Illidan hero)
• Fifth about trees ==> The trees placements looks ugly! You should really seperate them and make them more pulished.
• Sixth about Players Start Location placements ==> I think you should place trees and other doodads to make distances between the players so that they could not see each other of them.
• Seventh ==> You should really make correct use of cliffs and make them much more better.
• And Last about description ==> Try this post of Rufus to get a full information about how to make a nice description: Description Guide - Maps

Overall, I rate this map 2.5/5.
I hope you fix these points, mate to change my rating.

Just believe yourself, mate to create great maps! ( Well, that's my slogan lol)

 

[pasha]

thanks for reviewing my map. i will fix the terrain as you sugeested

guys how to add more doodads to world editor

and where i can get it

 

[PrinceYaser]

guys how to add more doodads to world editor

You can search the tool section for Jass New Gen Pack tool. Download it and open your map with it and search for doodad limit in it.

 

[pasha]

i updated my map i hope you like it

guys i just updated my map again please review my map and give me a rate to this map

in next update i will change race melee map

 

[Rufus]

Pasha, you are not allowed to multipost! I merged your posts this time, but try to not do it again in the future!
Use the "Edit" button instead found in the lower left of your post.

Also, your description is ok-looking, but it could really use some updating.
Check this link out, as it may be of help: Description Guide - Maps

Status set to awaiting update.

 

[pasha]

approved my map im not update it