An island

[Dark Master]

Humans made navy base on small island. Now, we see trade ship returning to base...

 

[Nbah]

Rocks in water look really out of place and don't make any sense at all. Just think about it, not only does the doodad placement suck, their even located in 5ft in the water. Sun needs to be lowered to be half-sunken in the water and be backed out far away. The tree placement near the building doesn't look right. You need to lower them in the ground more (the trees behind the building). Also you need a much better fog, this one just isn't cutting in.

 

[Dark Master]

OK. But I must disagree with rock placement. You never saw big rock in the water? Fail.
Doesn`t matter. Here it is.

 

[Wolfhelm]

This is not bad it could definatly use some more stuff in the sky like birds and maybe acouple clouds.

The ground is really smooth and those rocks would look better if they where more scattered - not in a straight line around the coast. I wonder if you just put those there because of blizzard cliffs..

 

[HappyCockroach]

The grass shouldn't go under the water like that. There should be a dirt/sand transition.

 

[Dark Master]

Fixin`...
Oh, there rocks ARE for covering cliffs, cuz I needed deep water.
And no, I did not want to add clouds because I want to give terrain that dawn without clouds feeling.

 

[Nbah]

Okay dude, let me make it simpler. I know there can be rocks in the water etc. My point was your method of placing those rocks was really, really, really bad >.> You made some kind of Stone Wall of rocks with catail shit which looks really bad. And you don't really need deep water or shallow water when using the water doodad. I cooked up a screenshot to explain this.....

 

[Dark Master]

Hey, where are these rock models from?

 

[Nbah]

Find under Attached Files, SteinLords4b.mdx

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/terrain-board-267/discussion-contest-sanctioned-models-115741/

 

[thelifelessone]

We allowed to use that model? (stupid question. Here's a better one. Who made it, so I can credit them?)

 

[Nbah]

. . . . . . I don't know, maybe Stein Lord? pffffff

 

[Super-Sheep]

Just use lower tool to make it deeper without cliffs.

 

[thelifelessone]

. . . . . . I don't know, maybe Stein Lord? pffffff

 

[thedeathunterxx]

the sun looks like it chillin above the water... like it is a tiny sun hoverin over the water.... Perhaps add depth to this picture... place the sun over a horizon... your gonna have to change the camera angle to do that though...

this terrain could look better. The rocks are wierd. Listen to Nbah. he speaks true.

 

[syltman]

. . . . . . I don't know, maybe Stein Lord? pffffff

It was used in a RPG of something... pretty old post I think.

 

[Dark Master]

the sun looks like it chillin above the water... like it is a tiny sun hoverin over the water.... Perhaps add depth to this picture... place the sun over a horizon... your gonna have to change the camera angle to do that though...

this terrain could look better. The rocks are wierd. Listen to Nbah. he speaks true.

I did it in first pic, but Nbah said I must lower sun to make it more sunken.

 

[Megafyr]

You should do something with the transactions between the grass and the water. Also those rocks need work. I don't really think the cattails fit there.