Naruto: Suiton, Suishouha [v1.9]

xxdingo93xx · 11-30-2008, 03:04 PM

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Note that my rating will not have any influence to moderators reviews.
This review consists out of my personal attidude and opinion about this spell/these spells.

Review

Idea/Creativity: 6/10
Coding: 6/10
Balance: 8/10
Ability Tooltip: 10/10
MUI: Yes (+2/10)
(Yes: +2/10, No: -2/10, MPI: +/-0/10)
Language: vJass (+2/10)
(GUI: +/- 0/10, Jass: +1/10, vJass: +2/10)
Total: 34/40

Medial: 8/10 = 4/5

Viewers Note:
A pretty simple idea but nice in execution.
Your coding style is "OK", but for saying it is vJass you couldve improved it a lot.
1.

Jass:

local trigger Suiton_Suishouha = CreateTrigger(  )

Nullify the trigger.
2. Use globals instead of constant functions.
3. Add more globals , for example:

Jass:

call DestroyEffect(AddSpecialEffectTarget("Abilities\\Spells\\Other\\CrushingWave\\CrushingWaveDamage.mdl", enum, "chest"))

This model string and attachement string could be set as global.
Not a critism what decreases your score, but make your code clearer. Make it in an order.
It is balanced well, some lack in documentation though.
Your ability tooltip gained full score. Well documented, colored and looks nice.
MUI and vJass -> extra score.
All in all a good, simple spell. Could have gained a better rating.

kewlthis · 11-30-2008, 03:40 PM

aww I expected something more unique, its a decent spell. But I think I won this one :)

TheBlooddancer · 11-30-2008, 04:56 PM

I suggest you to enlargen the knockback, and add something more original to it. Right now, its pretty plain, and i agree with Kewlthis, he will win, if you dont make something more original.

StaberFire · 11-30-2008, 06:35 PM

I would have liked to see a little more creativity.. damage and knockback is very unoriginal. You could have at least added some form of slowing effect, I dunno. Just seems dry. At least the visual is nice.

-Berz- · 11-30-2008, 07:05 PM

Yeah knock back is so old... Try something think of something new. =)

Ribenamania · 11-30-2008, 11:08 PM

Oh no !! Why people doesn't look things farer? Hanky I know your review's quality is higher than DrSuperGood and that's why kewlthis's crow spell got rating of 4 instead of mine, 3.

And btw, mine aren't original.. so do yours kewlthis? Yours was just blink strike + aoe damage with effects. Btw. StaberFire nice comment.. the spell does slow down enemies, I used thunderclap as the base spell.

And this is important, I made this spell for people to choose what they like, the knockback, wave speed, wave damage, wave numbers etc are manipulatable.. that's what the spell good of..

Well, I would convert all the functions to constant variables soon when I'm in the cpu that contains vJNGP. Anyway, thanks for comment and rating!

Edit:
Oh ya Hanky, xD I lol'd.. that esc was just for testing the spell, you don't have to count that in the rating =.=

Spell updated

TheBlooddancer · 12-01-2008, 07:23 AM

Meh. Its pretty hard to see the knockback as it is, thats why, i think you should make it larger. Right now, it doesnt really do anything.

And i love the way, that you can design the spell, step by step.

kewlthis · 12-01-2008, 07:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ribenamania

Oh no !! Why people doesn't look things farer? Hanky I know your review's quality is higher than DrSuperGood and that's why kewlthis's crow spell got rating of 4 instead of mine, 3.

And btw, mine aren't original.. so do yours kewlthis? Yours was just blink strike + aoe damage with effects. Btw. StaberFire nice comment.. the spell does slow down enemies, I used thunderclap as the base spell.

And this is important, I made this spell for people to choose what they like, the knockback, wave speed, wave damage, wave numbers etc are manipulatable.. that's what the spell good of..

Well, I would convert all the functions to constant variables soon when I'm in the cpu that contains vJNGP. Anyway, thanks for comment and rating!

Edit:
Oh ya Hanky, xD I lol'd.. that esc was just for testing the spell, you don't have to count that in the rating =.=

Spell updated

Well atleast my effects are really original. And if both ideas are unoriginal then the special effects count more.. Anyway so we need to set up the poll or does hawking do it?

Ribenamania · 12-01-2008, 08:32 AM

Well don't be too rush =) Just wait a few more days .. you know, we may improve our spells more.. Anyway, my spell is way more efficient at least..

@TheBlooddancer - The knockback is manipulatable so you can set it to higher anytime.. This spell is majority in changing stuffs.. If you change the numbers of waves to 4 it will cause another effect out... and also others.. every changes makes the spell better.. and btw.. you can make waves times.. that goes twice and 3 and 4 5 6 ... and wave interval.. Please check it out, I made those stuffs and no one's gonna see it because they only try the spell in the map but not changing the values in the trigger..

Hanky · 12-01-2008, 08:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ribenamania

Oh ya Hanky, xD I lol'd.. that esc was just for testing the spell, you don't have to count that in the rating =.=

I don't said it's important, but it's a possible improvement for the demo map. In my opinion also the demo triggers should be leakfree. Well, I will review your spell soon again.

Ribenamania · 12-01-2008, 08:36 AM

xD .... I haven't clean the leaks yet and now I'm not in the cpu that has WE so please don't look at the "esc" trigger.. I will clean them soon.

TheBlooddancer · 12-01-2008, 08:48 AM

Actually, im playing with the spell data right now (In school).

And i like, that you can change allmost everything, and create a whole new spell (Moer waves, dmg, knockback, etc)

Ribenamania · 12-01-2008, 09:08 AM

Finally someone =)

kewlthis · 12-01-2008, 12:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ribenamania

Well don't be too rush =) Just wait a few more days .. you know, we may improve our spells more.. Anyway, my spell is way more efficient at least..

@TheBlooddancer - The knockback is manipulatable so you can set it to higher anytime.. This spell is majority in changing stuffs.. If you change the numbers of waves to 4 it will cause another effect out... and also others.. every changes makes the spell better.. and btw.. you can make waves times.. that goes twice and 3 and 4 5 6 ... and wave interval.. Please check it out, I made those stuffs and no one's gonna see it because they only try the spell in the map but not changing the values in the trigger..

cause its your entry...If the spell is good, you dont have to change anything. Of course its a good thing, but doesnt matter anything to me.