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Old 11-27-2008, 03:54 PM   #2 (permalink)
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so the spell looks nice, but do you wanted, that the spell can be active more then one time.
and also i couldn't find that you nulled the trigger var in the missle struct :O
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Old 11-27-2008, 04:08 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Well, the spell can be active more than once, simply to demonstrate that it is Mui. It is up to the user to change the spell duration to something higher than 20 seconds.

I thought I did do so. And yeah I did. I decided not to make an OnDestroy method for the missile since it haves to loop through all missiles attached to the data struct anyways. Therefor, I nulled them before I call the 'native OnDestroy' at the end of the OrbitalMovement:
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set j = 0
loop
    exitwhen j >= dt.mtot
    call KillUnit(dt.m[j].mis)
    call DestroyTrigger(dt.m[j].trg)
    set dt.m[j].mis = null
    set dt.m[j].trg = null
    call dt.m[j].destroy()
    set j = j + 1
endloop

Thanks for the warning though:p
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Old 11-27-2008, 06:11 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Fun, i once did the exact same thing as you, using this as base.
Also, i made some skill based on shockwave, which used the 'orbs' (making one less swirling around) but damaged units in your facing.
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Idea/Creativity: 8/10
Coding: 10/10
Balance: 10/10
Ability Tooltip: 10/10
MUI: Yes (+2/10)
(Yes: +2/10, No: -2/10, MPI: +/-0/10)
Language: vJass (+2/10)
(GUI: +/- 0/10, Jass: +1/10, vJass: +2/10)
Total: 42/40
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Medial: 10/10 = 5/5

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A very decent and original idea. I like it, especially the work with effects.
It is well coded, I can see no flaws. The only thing I can oppugn is your coding style... for example your globals. 1 row -> global, 2 row -> comment etc.
I dislike using another row only for comments, that makes it for some people unclear, it would save lines to just put the comments behind the matching global but well, it is everyones own coding style
Ability tooltip is the standard wc3 ability tooltip what every spell should have at least.
MUI, vJass -> extra score.
All in all, this spell deserves a highly recommended.
It is just an idea...but wouldnt the spell look even better if it was like immolaton or manashield? Switching it on/off with mana drain overtime? :P
Well, personal taste ^^ GJ
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Old 11-27-2008, 06:52 PM   #6 (permalink)
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for example your globals. 1 row -> global, 2 row -> comment
heh, I'm actually writing the comments as a sidenote next to the globals usually, starting of at same point. But then, since the special effects consists long strings I decided to put everything in front of it. I could change that though.

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It is just an idea...but wouldnt the spell look even better if it was like immolaton or manashield? Switching it on/off with mana drain overtime? :P
Well, I could add that as well, giving an option to the user of which one to import.
Thanks for the feedback =)

And thanks, you too TheBlooddancer:P That spell looks cool too ('if it only was mui').
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Yus. I liked it when i started modding. Then when i gained Experience.. I saw its flaws :D
But its nice anyways (Yay for Illidans Projectile!)
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Old 11-27-2008, 09:22 PM   #8 (permalink)
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The spell is updated and now supports Immolation or Activate/Deactivate based abilities.
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Old 11-27-2008, 10:29 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Oh, great! You improved it since you submitted it for the contest.
(Okay, you told that you´re going to improve it, but well, the result is great).
You get 5/5 from me. It´s a pity that you had no time to submit this version for the contest.
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Old 11-27-2008, 10:37 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Paladon, thanks =). Yeah I improved it some and cleaned the leaks ofc :P
Maybe I will spend some time this weekend making the spell more vJass by using more methods instead of functions (its the same actually and shouldn't make it that much more efficient, but it looks nicer.)
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May a mod download this spell
let him rate highly recommended
and may he honour the green shell
before this thread has ended.


Damn, we need a mod stumbling over this spell.
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Old 11-27-2008, 10:55 PM   #12 (permalink)
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;) heh, no rush. I would have to go to bed now anyways (pah...). If we are lucky it will be reviewed during the night.
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Old 11-28-2008, 10:48 AM   #13 (permalink)
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It's even better now ;P
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Old 11-28-2008, 11:33 AM   #14 (permalink)
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Thanks, again. And thanks for the approval Hanky =)
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