Striking Sword - Concept Characters
Hi guys, this is my first post here and I do hope you entertain my thread.
First of all, I'm not sure if this is the correct place to post this, but since this is technically for a story then..mehh, haha. Just tell me if this needs to be moved.
Ok, so this is a concept for characters that I plan to use in my story. And for me to fully grasp and flesh out the characters, I decided to put them in a Dota (Aos) form. So the characters that I have here have 3 "basic" skills and 1 "ultimate" skill. Although please be reminded that I did NOT make them as hero suggestions.
I just want to receive feedback on the character concept, the skill descriptions and mechanisms, and other aesthetic suggestions. I do not intend to make these characters balanced as per Dota terms because this is not intended for gameplay, so please refrain from commenting about the numbers. The numbers are just there so there could be a measurement of how "powerful" the skill can/may be.
So there you have it, please provide constructive criticisms so if ever I manage to complete this story, then I will post it here.
P.S. I do give permission to those people who would want to copy these concept characters as their original, but please do give a little recognition.
Last edited by Gantz07; 04-14-2012 at 11:55 PM.