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A suggestion..please improve your english. This will help your cause a LOT. Find someone who's good at both German and English and take his/her. help.
 
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A suggestion..please improve your english. This will help your cause a LOT. Find someone who's good at both German and English and take his/her. help.

From Sorceress
You can't expect anyone to just become good at english just because someone advises you to..

This guy 'Grievous1' is German, and doesn't speak english perfectly,
yet hes projects has become some of the biggest and most viewed projects all over warcraft.. hell, even my english sucks, but its readable and understandable..
ok!
Want anyone help me to translate?
German = English

From Sorceress
I could help with translation for your maps if needed. Just not a German to English translation. You write in English and i correct mistakes.
 
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I can help, Im learning german, so I can give a rough translation. Ill have to use Google translate for many words though.

@ Sorceress Im not talking about perfect english, but stuff like 'I work not regularly' could use correction.
 
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~ Custom Houses.
~ Furniture Items for decoration of the house.
~ A Auctions Shop/Bank.
~ Clothes.
~ Male/Female Characters.
~ More Jobs.
~ Stamina, Life, Strenght Workout Training Facilities.
~ Cars Shop.


Just a few suggestions for your map, i hope you can use any of it! :)

Also, if you need help with anything else like Pictures or the Desciption, just say so.
 
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some suggest from me if you gonna make a LoaP if i'm right
From Zlowly

make a secret item and hero
make a boss to fight
make a job to open another hero and item
make a island and put house in there
The idea i got from LoaP ultimate maybe you should see that map
~Regards ...
 
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From Sorceress

~ Custom Houses.
~ Furniture Items for decoration of the house.
~ A Auctions Shop/Bank.
~ Clothes.
~ Male/Female Characters.
~ More Jobs.
~ Stamina, Life, Strenght Workout Training Facilities.
~ Cars Shop.


Just a few suggestions for your map, i hope you can use any of it! :)

Also, if you need help with anything else like Pictures or the Desciption, just say so.


some suggest from me if you gonna make a LoaP if i'm right
From Zlowly

make a secret item and hero
make a boss to fight
make a job to open another hero and item
make a island and put house in there
The idea i got from LoaP ultimate maybe you should see that map
~Regards ...




Cooming soon

Its ready

I working on it


I don't know if i create it

~ Custom Houses.
~ Furniture Items for decoration of the house.
~ A Auctions Shop/Bank.
~ Clothes.
~ Male/Female Characters.
~ More Jobs.
~ Stamina, Life, Strenght Workout Training Facilities.
~ Cars Shop.

make a secret item and hero
make a boss to fight
make a job to open another hero and item
make a island and put house in there




Update

v0.86 added inventory with 30 Spaces
v0.87 Ability Conflict fixed
If you create a item and have a mobile phone in your inventory, then
you call a taxi
 
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Love the Taxi idea.
You should make a menu pop op when the taxi comes,
that shows some different locations where to drive you to.

Like this:

Bank (5$)
Car Shop (10$)
Park (4$)
etz..

the money should depend from the distance of the locations.


~~~
- Mafia Groups
- Boats
- Animals (Dog, Cat etz..)
[ Also, make the animals follow their owners {Only 1 pr. person}]
- Different Weathers
- Secret Funny Jobs
[ Protect the Mayor, Protect the VIP etz etz..
- School
[ For intelligence ]
- Taxes
- Trains/Buses
- Computers for emails only
 
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From Sorceress
Love the Taxi idea.
You should make a menu pop op when the taxi comes,
that shows some different locations where to drive you to.

Like this:

Bank (5$)
Car Shop (10$)
Park (4$)
etz..

the money should depend from the distance of the locations.


~~~
- Mafia Groups
- Boats
- Animals (Dog, Cat etz..)
[ Also, make the animals follow their owners {Only 1 pr. person}]
- Different Weathers
- Secret Funny Jobs
[ Protect the Mayor, Protect the VIP etz etz..
- School
[ For intelligence ]
- Taxes
- Trains/Buses
- Computers for emails only

i think my idea with a ingame onlinegame is not so bad
,but ok i work on them

Look what happens if you trow a molotov (recipe in description
your ideas are good and i want to work on it
 
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Made you this if you want it?
 
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From what I see from the screenshots, the terrain might need some more working.

]Garbage Company
]]Don't you think torches(in the pillars) and streetlights are kind of conflicting?
]]The crates might also need some work. If those are doodads, you could use PgUp
]]PgDown to "pile" it.

]The Bridge From A Park
]]I understand it's a park, thus the really "neat" trimmed grass.
]]However, I think the dirt is kind of bland. Spice it up with some doodads maybe?
]]Flowers, bushes, maybe a path.

In contrast, I actually like your concepts of making the walls doodads, the flowing river, and the appropriate use of model imports.

If those screenshots are of an older version, sorry for wasting 10 minutes of your life.

EDIT:

I have just tested your map, here are some aspects I'd like to point out:
-Music is unfitting. Cool, I agree, but I would use a "calmer" one, i.e ambiance.
-You should let the player know that they actually has to purchase tomes.
-Hero is only strength based. Making other tomes a little "useless". Give the player a choice between the three attributes.
-A player can pick up more than one phone.
-Refrain from using "sh*t".
-I saw a garbageman pick up a phone during the start of the game.
-Is it just me, or are trash dumps heroes?
-I obtained a watering can from a trash dump. Is this intentional?
-Taxi not functional.
-Hero having "Go Out Of Inventory" skill.
-A lot of tooltips are missing.
-Game not fully English.

Some good points however:
-I like the walls.
-The taxi system has potential.
-The inventory system is something new for a Life Map.

Overall, this map has much to improve on. I understand that this is an alpha version, and I look forward to seeing it in Maps Section.

All the best!
 
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1st:
I know that I still have to improve the terrain, but
first I want finish the Map

2nd:And I know the bugs and i work on it

3rd:I don't think you use the taxi-system correctly


-A player can pick up more than one phone.

-I don't understand what you mean, but you can pickup more than a mobile phone

-I saw a garbageman pick up a phone during the start of the game.

-The system of the garbageman is:
Pickup every item and put it into the trash

-Is it just me, or are trash dumps heroes?

I know, but thats the only way how it works!
(i delete the proper names)

-I obtained a watering can from a trash dump. Is this intentional?

maybe!(actually it's a bug of a trigger)
So you can pickup items from the trash!

-Hero having "Go Out Of Inventory" skill.

I forgot to change it.

-A lot of tooltips are missing.
Where is missing the tooltip.

-Game not fully English.
Because alpha version

-I like the walls.
I want to work on a better texture

-The taxi system has potential.
I love this idea.

-The inventory system is something new for a Life Map.
It's the easyest way to expand the inventory to 30 places.
 
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What I meant is that one player can pick up more than one phone, thus making another player lack one or more.

One tooltip I saw missing is the spellbook which has "Interact" in it.

At least don't make garbagemen pick up items a player would need. Like phones.
Or perhaps you could just place the phone directly inside the hero's inventory. I think this can be done in trigger editor.

I might be usin the taxi system incorrectly, as you have claimed. As such, it would be much apreciated if you could give clear instructions regarding the taxi system.

I have some ideas for possible jobs:
-Mailman
-Office Worker (maybe he has to do errands)

And some other ideas in overall:
-Shareholders
-Random Muggings
-Happenings (crisis, fire, earthquake, etc)
 
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