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18:02, 22nd Apr 2010
DonDustin: I like your concept, but it still needs some improvements:
1. please try to use other textures for the clothes, as it still looks too much like Gul'dan.
2. another weapon would be good. That dagger plane weapon is way too low poly and does not look good. Making the staff a bit more interesting might be a good idea aswell. The ghoul had was already a nice start.
3. I don't like that you added a whole skeleton to his back. The first reason is that it adds many additional faces to your model which would not bee needed at all. But the second and more important reason is that it is not really creative. Those 2 skeleton heads + the chest with that one arm should do it aswell. And if you still want to add more skeleton to it, I would suggest to take a look at my point "2.", why dont you make the handle of the stuff out of a skeleton leg and the dagger a modification of a skeleton hand?
It will not be "rejected until updated" as it is already quite fine, but please take my advice
General Frank: I like the changes and the model so I approve.
DonDustin: I like your concept, but it still needs some improvements:
1. please try to use other textures for the clothes, as it still looks too much like Gul'dan.
2. another weapon would be good. That dagger plane weapon is way too low poly and does not look good. Making the staff a bit more interesting might be a good idea aswell. The ghoul had was already a nice start.
3. I don't like that you added a whole skeleton to his back. The first reason is that it adds many additional faces to your model which would not bee needed at all. But the second and more important reason is that it is not really creative. Those 2 skeleton heads + the chest with that one arm should do it aswell. And if you still want to add more skeleton to it, I would suggest to take a look at my point "2.", why dont you make the handle of the stuff out of a skeleton leg and the dagger a modification of a skeleton hand?
It will not be "rejected until updated" as it is already quite fine, but please take my advice
General Frank: I like the changes and the model so I approve.