Nerubian Queen/ Leviathan

[Moderator]

09:51, 23rd May 2015
Misha: obviously needs some smoothness in some anims, a more elaborate death and morph anims, and not a spam of particles.. her corrupted head also could use being more grotesque and more intimidating and corrupted spikes/spider eggs being 'glued' on her abdomen is a bad idea.... try to make that somewhat better, like.. if some specie of spider carries her eggs/young with her, then observe how they do it and apply to here

okay.. the old (siren face) queen has some issue in her morph anim where the particles are either cut or don't appear ingame.(might as well make the back-tentacles appear only at second but whith the hands) Her morph also needs some sound to be associated with the darkness that comes over her. her death alternate anim needs a faceless, unboken, or duneworm death sound, as they fit the creature she is then and also she needs some attachment points like 'hand left/right' overhead, head, chest, and weapon. so she can be a complete hero
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The new queen, she needs a crypt fiend death sound (for normal death)(also faceless/unboken/duneworm death sound for alternate death). the aura at her 'death alternate' should also disappear like it does on the older queen. and 'dissipate alternate' should have the undead thing again. she also needs the above-mentioned attachment points (more-less) needs nerubian footstep sounds and footprints. Her Morph needs the suitable sound of darkness overtaiking. Also, you should try removing the fames/anims for 'disabled' and 'disabled1' as they really serve no function.. + that you'll loose a bit of filesize too.

 

[Hantoo]

Really Great Job, +Rep
Or later XD Can't give now XD
5/5

 

[Splub]

Great work! God Bless!

 

[Misha]

some anims are not really well thought out.. some need smoothness.. some need particle control..

 

[MogulKahn]

Hmm, looks nice and interesting. Keep up good work mate!

 

[InfernalTater]

This is really cool!

You could improve the morph animation by adding an extra stage to it. Instead of instantly changing, have the spikes rise out of its back and the tentacles expand out from the shoulders.

4/5, But this is definitely something that could earn a 5/5 after some polishing.

 

[DrakkarovCh]

Really interesting idea in corrupting nerubians like that...
About the model, its nice, but you could improve it, to look more smoother

 

[PROXY]

I like the idea, yet the execution needs a bit more work.

Particles are to.. plain right now. The wrap could use some tweakings here and there and here corupted face totally needs more work, right now she just looks...derpy. But I like the direction your going.

 

[Misha]

I still think those spikes and tiny tentacles on the alternate form's abdomen need to be replaced with something else.. they kinda still don't feel alright to me..

well.. maybe only tentacles

 

[Mike]

This is more, than impressive, dude)

 

[Misha]

i swear this alternate form gets more creepier by the update

anyway, i still think the death animations need more.. 'stuff' going on.. nerubians often have a flailing or twitching death.. sure, that's not really a must, but, a body needs to look like it has bounced a tiny bit when hitting the ground, and then all bodyparts go limp. also why not make a really theatrical, agonizing morph anim? could work, since you don't have her with a 'morph alternate' anim

EDIT: you can make the animations longer in matrix eater, if you're struggling, not having enough frames to animate in

 

[MatiS]

i swear this alternate form gets more creepier by the update

Thanks

you can make the animations longer in matrix eater, if you're struggling, not having enough frames to animate in

That's why death anim looks rather bad at the end - I didn't have enough frames to make it look better. I'm gonna improve it soon . Thank you

 

[jonbon29]

Nice nerubian, they look really creepy and those eggs are cute!

 

[WhiteFang]

Amazing,i'm in love with the one on the right
5/5 + rep
Keep up the good work,i'm looking forward to more of your work.You are truly talented

 

[Direfury]

The idea is good, but you've still got the exact same problem as usual. The animations need a ton of work.

Look at the attacks. If those were melee, do you think they would hurt at all? If the character is throwing something, would it even get to their target?

For the other animations, such as the death, is the character floating? Why aren't their feet anchored to the ground when they're supposed to be? I've been noticing the exact same problem with nearly all the other animators here these days, and I'm growing tired of my advice being ignored.

I hate having to do this, due to how it tends to come off, but look at some of my models, such as King Dragonheart, the Tauren Chieftain, and Thrall.

Look at their deaths and walk animations. While not my best, they atleast demonstrate the points I've been trying to get across. Look at how much weight I put behind their motions, and how their entire body moves for attacks.

Take my advice. Keep putting stuff out, and improve.

 

[sarumanthecursed]

I think it would be nice if the skin was a dark scale like black or purple similar to blizzards model, I just don't find the fleshy color really suits her

 

[Wasabee]

I like the concept you have here but some animations needs some smooth execution and improvements. The Queen looks a bit thin and the upper body looks odd to me.