Echo of Jaina

[Moderator]

Misha 19th Jul 2013

Moderator's Review: okay, first thing first, the model looks really simple, not enough things have been changed, Next, the texture the model uses is totally unneeded, since it's basically the same banshee ranger thing.. do try to make something more unique out of this.. ( i kinda mentioned something in my post on this thread) and also, the particle count is way too high, reduce it by half, or maybe a lill more..

nice, useful and performs well ingame, approved

 

[DeuceGorgon]

Corrupted Jaina? DDD

Idea is good but you can add more effects..

 

[Skypsi]

Medivhs or blood mage cloak texture would match better with the darker tones.

 

[General Frank]

Bad edit.
Just a rather cheap skin change.

 

[CRIS]

Just a rather cheap skin change.

At this model, I wanted to keep the basic idea.
But i will try to add something for it!
More effects, if possible, and some extras.
I hope you will like it.

 

[General Frank]

At this model, I wanted to keep the basic idea.
But i will try to add something for it!
More effects, if possible, and some extras.
I hope you will like it.

I doubt it.^^

 

[Lordofth3cl4n]

damn i though she ad a scythe nice model 5/5

 

[CRIS]

Updated The texture, added more efects, added some geosets for better look
Rate if you like it.

 

[SpasMaster]

I am not a modeler and I cannot tell how much work went into this or if it's properly done, but I can tell for sure that this is pertty useful.

 

[CRIS]

Thank you, i know it's not the best, but i hope that everyone will enjoy it!

 

[Em!]

Never ever upload your first model. It is bound to be crap which in your case it is. This can be done without the copy and paste texture and you just did some crap geomerges and change the colors of the particles and texture on the original model.

Use the modeling tutorials and search for a way to improve cause this is just bad.

 

[Lordul Dracula]

Jaina nice 5/5

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Too simple and cape is unfitting.

 

[Misha]

This is totally basic right now, and rather.. un-approvable.. looks like a basic forsaken banshee ranger, only with staff..

wouldn't it be better if you try changing it to be.. 'echo of jaina' or however is called, from the 'end time' dungeon in WoW, that would feel different, perhaps creepy as well..

 

[stonneash]

I like the wrap on the model, maybe "corrupted jaina" needs more corruption on her

 

[eubz]

Why do you need this "BansheeRanger2.blp " when you can use in-game textures like the ones you used.

 

[Kaizer]

few suggestion:
- make the book stay on her left leg on "Stand Victory"
- remove the sfx on dissipate
- use a real dagger

~ used "View in 3D" in viewing

 

[Wazzz]

Jaina nice 5/5

director's cut! tenouttaten!

 

[Mgeterno11]

Nice try, i like the idea, but it should be a bit more decorated.

 

[Misha]

so.. i gave you a few more things to tweak in the PM, mate

 

[Burningreaver]

Now; I consider a support to be in order. Therefore:

Well done.

I wish to ask you to continue in your doings.


I am giving you a rating 4/5.

 

[Misha]

aand got you a few more tweaks to do ^^

 

[Kyrbi0]

tenouttaten!

Hahaha, Game Grumps. Even here. Surprised there aren't more GG avatars or something.

 

[Shade Da Scout]

so...this became overused?

 

[_lycan]

I doubt it.^^

Nice attitude!

 

[Misha]

I'm thinking.. how should this ghost be made to look a lot less war3-ghost-ish, and more like an echo.. blend maybe?

any model makers with ideas around?

 

[General Frank]

I'm thinking.. how should this ghost be made to look a lot less war3-ghost-ish, and more like an echo.. blend maybe?

any model makers with ideas around?

Aren't you supposed to be the top of the crop and know such things?^^
As a honourable moderator of course.

But in all seriousness, the whole idea is okay-ish but the execution is not that good and rather boring. All that was been done is a little texture replacement and some rather weak geoset replacements.
No offence, but this is just my opinion.

 

[Misha]

Aren't you supposed to be the top of the crop and know such things?^^
As a honourable moderator of course.

But in all seriousness, the whole idea is okay-ish but the execution is not that good and rather boring. All that was been done is a little texture replacement and some rather weak geoset replacements.
No offence, but this is just my opinion.

nothing wrong in sparking up a conversation might get the author more ideas what to do..

what would you suggest him? if it isn't mind-boggling

 

[General Frank]

nothing wrong in sparking up a conversation might get the author more ideas what to do..

what would you suggest him? if it isn't mind-boggling

We had a Pm conversation and I gave him some ideas.

 

[799972734]

I don't like it.

 

[FUJI]

Looks like a ghost jaina