DwarfDathbringer

[Moderator]

20:38, 3rd May 2010
DonDustin: I like your concept, but it has a few issues:
1. the unwrap of the back is too messy right now.
2. the weapons seem a bit too boring to me. The club is actually fine, but you should create it on your own and not only take the faceless one weapon. The axe could also need another texture (at least for the handle, because the brown part does not have any shading). I also thing that you should go for some frostmourne theme for them( maybe some runes or some kind of head that makes the weapons look more creative/special/undead.
3. I think you should replace the skulls with something else. Some banner, a cape or a shield would be a better choice.
4. I suggest to use the SkeletonOrc texture for the face. It is much more detailed and realistic.

Changes are made. Resource approval.

 

[Lageron Doom]

Well, You might make an attachment at the weapons with a small frost air just like frostmourne (pedestal) so i give you an 4/5. And before i forgets his head looks a little weird...

 

[JokeMaster]

I must say i didn't like your undead dwarfs but this one is so good i could kiss him! 5/5.

 

[13L4M3]

5/5 +rep N voteforapproval.
This truly a master piece, very good work.

 

[karland90]

its lovely work, but imo the weapons dont kinda fit together. i, personally, would have gone with 2 maces maybe, for difference sake. then again, an axe (or a hammer) is all a dwarf needs, cant argue with that. :/

 

[Deolrin]

You could add an Undead Dissipate spawn object to make him die like a real Undead hero. Would look pretty badass.
What you need to do is to create a new animation in WarFroger, MDLVis or whatever, and call it Dissipate. It needs to have a 2000 frames length(so if the first frame is 5000, the last frame would be 7000). The whole animation should be the same as the last frame of Death. Then save it(Important: as a new file), and add a new Object Event with Magos. Set the type of Object Event to Spawn Object, and the data, the little four-digit code, to "UDIS". Give it a new Event Track and set the time to the beginning of your Dissipate animation(so if we take our earlier example, 5000-7000, you have to write 5000)

Also, some teamcolor, for example on the weapons, would be nice. Perhaps even a frozen beard, or some red\purple\teamcolored eye glow, would be nice.

 

[Warhunter]

DeathBringer =)

 

[Sellenisko]

Whohohou slowly please slowly and easily.... i will look what i can do.

 

[War_Golum]

awesome weapons

 

[Traxamillion]

The Shield on his back is from WoW.

 

[supertoinkz]

No it's not, it's from the loading screen of TFT's undead campaign, see it, it's near the shoulders.

 

[Deolrin]

This shield does exist in both WoW and WC3.

As Supertoinkz said, it is available in the Undead Campaign loading screen. As some sort of a shoulderpad holder.

 

[AIagremm]

Holy possum! Im loving it!

 

[Sellenisko]

Holy what ?

 

[AIagremm]

Possum!

This is a phrase I just created!

 

[Darkey]

Needs an icon, otherwise 4/5. :3

 

[Herian]

Soooo gonna use it... Good job.

 

[L_Lawliet]

HUZZAH great!

 

[Sellenisko]

Thank you

 

[Zekter]

5/5

i love it he is so cool that i could kiss him

 

[NiceOne]

mh, could be used as a frost deathknight? since they're duel wielding weapons, otherwise cool one great work

 

[Maximum_Evil]

wow freaking epic model!

 

[Fire Eagle]

Oh, a metal version of mountain king! so cool. He looks evil so maybe i will call it 'Undead Dwarf'

 

[Trakya]

when do you replace his weapon to a hammer?

 

[jonbon29]

A very nice model, could use a talking portrait too.

 

[BETABABY]

Needs an icon, otherwise 4/5. :3

Oh snap.. I just created an icon for this one


The problem is how do I link this model to my icon?

 

[warcraftmodding123]

make a human version. this looks great btw

 

[Warseeker]

Looks Epic 5/5.

 

[deepstrasz]

It's the type of badass that's good ass.