Survivors of Argus

[Moderator]

12:42, 20th May 2014
Orcnet: Map approved, can be acceptable

 

[Sunreaver]

Screenies: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/members/232090-albums6704.html

 

[Wa666r]

You copied the Draenei description that I wrote for my map. Those are my words.

 

[Shadow Fury]

Excluding this issue of the description which doesn't even have screenshots, here is my review:-

- Most of the units and abilities are obviously copy-pasted. For example, "Guard" can be clearly seen that it's the grunt with different model. Even its reseach which increases its combat capacities is still the same. Vindicator is obviously the Paladin. There is an ability which is just a replica of Thunder Clap but I can't remember its name. I mean, too many things were just copy-pasted
- Another issue is the icons. Some turn green when I pause the game. It means that some DISBTN icons were not properly imported. Look at the Import Manager and make sure that all DISBTN icons have been properly imported

SOME SUGGESTIONS:-
- Fix the mal-imported DISBTN icons
- Don't make everything seem obviously copy-pasted. For units, change their attack damage, HP and abilities. For abilities, don't let them resemble old ones. Change their icon (not necessarily a custom one),
change its data and give it a different description
- Next time, you might choose a bigger map

Well, for now, I give this 2.5/5 and rate 3. Vote for APPROVAL!

 

[Footman16]

Excluding this issue of the description which doesn't even have screenshots, here is my review:-

- Most of the units and abilities are obviously copy-pasted. For example, "Guard" can be clearly seen that it's the grunt with different model. Even its reseach which increases its combat capacities is still the same. Vindicator is obviously the Paladin. There is an ability which is just a replica of Thunder Clap but I can't remember its name. I mean, too many things were just copy-pasted
- Another issue is the icons. Some turn green when I pause the game. It means that some DISBTN icons were not properly imported. Look at the Import Manager and make sure that all DISBTN icons have been properly imported

SOME SUGGESTIONS:-
- Fix the mal-imported DISBTN icons
- Don't make everything seem obviously copy-pasted. For units, change their attack damage, HP and abilities. For abilities, don't let them resemble old ones. Change their icon (not necessarily a custom one),
change its data and give it a different description
- Next time, you might choose a bigger map

Well, for now, I give this 2.5/5 and rate 3. Vote for APPROVAL!

I don't think with all you've said this deserves an approval, those are some pretty big issues.

 

[Sunreaver]

Well the creator din't make those icons if someone make this disable btn for me

 

[Shadow Fury]

Well the creator din't make those icons if someone make this disable btn for me

If you knew that the creator didn't make DISBTN icons, then why did you even use them?

 

[Footman16]

Well the creator din't make those icons if someone make this disable btn for me

If you want to send me the icons I could make the DISBTNs for you.

 

[Legal_Ease]

NOTE TO MODERATOR: Please don't approve until Wa666r give's permission to re-use his description. He wrote that. And Its not fixed.

 

[Wa666r]

Sorry can u let me have the permission

No - you may not use my description. Those are my words; create your own. Even if you do grant me credit for it, I don't want you to use the description.

 

[Sunreaver]

Ok I will change it

 

[Heinvers]

Also improve the terrain. it's a bit lacking. 2/5

 

[Idaero Ace]

Hey creator, I have a great suggestion about the description, change it with other words but have the same meaning.

Also about the icons, use Button Manager
Here is the link http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/tools-560/button-manager-v1-8-2-a-116280/

 

[Daffa]