1) Description - Description at this site was way too lacking, it doesn't seems to be good enough to follow the submission rules. Please fix it.
2) Terrain - Terrain was lacking. The usage of other destructible/doodad was far too less as most of the time the only destructible that are being use seems to be pine tree.
From what I view, all those tree seems to be pretty close to each others as well. Try not to make them stack too close and use more height variation for the tiles as the terrain was way too smooth.
The wild life element was lacking as well, try add more of it such as a flock of birds to enchance the visual.
Avoid using blizzard cliff especially by making a multiple layers of it. Blizzard cliff are more suitable to make canyon rather than a hill/mountain.
The thing that really puzzle me was, how the hell that tree grow on the rocks?
3) Camera - Camera was badly done, several times it run through destructible/doodad and was way too choppy as well.
4) Animation - As far as I view, most of the unit was standing still like a dummy.
5) Sound & Sound Effect - When the catapult attack, I do not hear a single sounds at all. While the head villager was casting lightning from afar, I could still hear it?
The only sound effect I ever hear was the lightning.
6) Music - No music for a cinematic?
7) Fog - The fog need to be improve as it doesn't cover the entire area, some edge could still be view.
8) Replayability - I have to say it was very low, it was full of dull conversation with typo errors. No music, no sound and the only sound effect I ever heard was lightning.
Along with choppy camera movement that constantly run through destructible/doodad, it even kill the replayability as well.
4.68 mb for a cinematic that lack of music/sound, it was certainly a overkill size even if it was a single player cinematic.
Just view this screenshot to see a few typo you made.
It was recommend not to use dark blue to indicate the character name, as it was similiar to background colour; rendering it hard to be seen.
9) Scripting/Triggering - I have to said it isn't that good, you should have the entire cinematic setup execute immediately instead of setting a 0.05 seconds wait. By doing it your way, I could hear the human music which are suddenly stop.
Using wait action was rather a bad idea as the min wait was 0.27 no matter how low you set it.
Overall - This cinematic need a lot of polish before it can be approve, especially the description which are currently lacking. Till this resources have better description at this site, the resources should stay at pending.
As for now, my rating was 2/5 (Lacking)
(Lacking)
