The Forty-Seven Ronin

[Moderator]

18:15, 22nd Apr 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[oldmilk]

shorten file name to allow v1.24 default working status, this way, people can leave it at the default name, and Hosts will deal with less DLers. Right now, people have to change the file name, and people may decide to get rid of different parts, resulting in different file name, and thus, resulting in DLing from the host, and thus, delaying playing time.

 

[light bolt30]

Can you post screenshots?

 

[shadow487]

shorten file name to allow v1.24 default working status, this way, people can leave it at the default name, and Hosts will deal with less DLers. Right now, people have to change the file name, and people may decide to get rid of different parts, resulting in different file name, and thus, resulting in DLing from the host, and thus, delaying playing time.

shortened file name to "47 Ronin OPT v1"

Can you post screenshots?

Getting screen shots right now.

Done

 

[shadow487]

feed back pplz?

 

[Lag_Reviews]

Heres a Review P:

Well I was recently saw this map and as it looked good, so I decided to give it a review.

So here is the review, Hope you enjoy and use my ideas and criticism to help improve your map.

The Review!

*Note I did not make it to any of the bosses to see if they are overpowered/unkillable

Things I liked:

• Nice animated loading screen
• Nice camera commands
• Good use of custom spells/icons
• Maze terrain was good

PRO's:

• No Bugs
• Few Glitches
• Most of the game worked

CON's:

• You have 2 spells that have the same effect (2 spells that increase the speed of nearby friendly units)
• Should not say that your hero has fallen when you get the next stage of the maze (Should say hero has made it to the next stage of the maze or something)
• Only one person has to make it to the end of the stage to get to the next part of the maze (Should have to wait for every alive player to get to the next stage of the maze before you can move on)
• Name of mana regeneration spell is broken "cffff0000Mana Regeneration"
• Continues are per team not per player (Should be 3 continues per player not per team, as some players are better than others and if there team brings them down then it wouldn't be good)
• No image near the name down the bottom just a black square
  No Image preview

  

Things you can do to improve the description:

• Could add an upcoming updates log so we know what you are working on fixing/adding
• Maybe you could add a youtube video of gameplay (This will attract more downloads if done well)
• Add something to the ingame description, the description under the preview map before you hit start game atm yours says "Nondescript"

Things you could add to the map to improve it:

• A confirm box for the "-name command", that tells everyone you have changed your name for example I type "-name bob" it would then say "Player 1 has changed his name from bill to bob" for example.

Suggestions

Suggestion Timer:

I was thinking at the start of the game where we have to wait a very very slow 30seconds that there needs to be something to tell us that the game is still working and hasn't infact frozen on us.

So, I was thinking you could add a countdown at the start so we know when the 30seconds are up and so we know the game hasn't frozen.

It would countdown from 30, then when 30 had disappeared 29 would appear and so on.

Overall, the map is a fun for a maze map which requires a lot of skill. Although the map seems impossible in some places, I think that just makes it more challenging and all the better (Hope it isn't impossible to finish). Also as there are some glitches/bugs/errors in the stuff that I tested I would still suggest this map to friends and people who like maze/avoid the npc styled maps and I would also suggest this map to friends as the bugs/glitches/errors are only minor.

I Vote for Approval and would give it a 2/5 It still has a little way to go yet before it is complete and up to scratch, so fix some of the cons I suggested and you will be well on your way.

All in all hope you liked my review as much as I enjoyed playing your map,
Lag_Reviews P:

PS: Why is the downloaded map name different to the ingame map name? Also can't wait to here your feedback on my review and see what you brign to this map in the future P:

 

[shadow487]

One Word=Wow, thanks alot Lag_Review this is exactly the review i needed for my map i will get working on it right away, +rep for taking your time to review my map, thank you.

 

[Lag_Reviews]

No worries...

One Word=Wow, thanks alot Lag_Review this is exactly the review i needed for my map i will get working on it right away, +rep for taking your time to review my map, thank you.

Glad you liked my review and are going to fix up your map, it is much appreciated thank-you.

I will re-review your map once you release the next version to see that it is all good,
Lag_Reviews P:

PS: Can't wait to see the next version, keep up the good work.

 

[Acorn511]

I don't know why but this map lags really hard whenever I play it. Did you destroy leaks?

 

[shadow487]

I don't know why but this map lags really hard whenever I play it. Did you destroy leaks?

umm all i know is that when i tested it it lags hard in the begining then it stops (thats why i put the 30 sec wait time) but if it persists to lag then i guess i gotta do something bout it =D

and aswell...i want to make a video...but i dont know how XD

ASWELL i tried to fix it when hero dies it doesnt say (name) has fallen but it didnt work

EDIT:
acorn i haz fixed the lag problem but i havent posted the map yet im hoping to fix my continues trigger before doing so

Edit:
i dont have 2 spells that increase movement speed for allys, one of them is and "aura" the other one is not, i just fixed the tooltip saying that the other one is and aura, the aura provides LESS movement speed than the other skill btw.

Edit:
for the black screen for the hero i can't fix it because sadly it never came with a portrait picture D=