2Player: Human01

[Moderator]

08:02, 23rd Feb 2014
Hell_Master: Map approved with a rating of 3/5 (Acceptable). See my review here for more information:

Review emerges!

I have played your 2P campaign map: Human 01 and I must say it looks good and all. You made some good changes without changing much of what Blizzard originally made or damaging some important parts of the map. Though there is a typo in the 3rd spell of Captain Falric, the color code of the "Level" text is broken. Also, there could be a little difference with the Footman and Axeman except being a model change only. I would suggest make the Axeman's attack much more higher than the Footman but his armor lower than the Footman so they can have some advantages in battle if you'll ask me.

Others looks fine and all but maybe you could have added some award or rewards on killing the Slave Master; may it be an item or gold for later use or on next parts of your map.

Anyway, rated 3/5 and Approved.

 

[PlankingWolf]

Was expecting something other than Captain Falric, but still cool.
But anyways, I love that you made Menag a hero, and added new units. I always expect something awesome out of these.
Can't wait to play this.

 

[Heinvers]

O you'll see that he changed a few things
I'll review it later though.
Edit: I won't review it, I have no time.

 

[Binsu]

Review emerges!

I have played your 2P campaign map: Human 01 and I must say it looks good and all. You made some good changes without changing much of what Blizzard originally made or damaging some important parts of the map. Though there is a typo in the 3rd spell of Captain Falric, the color code of the "Level" text is broken. Also, there could be a little difference with the Footman and Axeman except being a model change only. I would suggest make the Axeman's attack much more higher than the Footman but his armor lower than the Footman so they can have some advantages in battle if you'll ask me.

Others looks fine and all but maybe you could have added some award or rewards on killing the Slave Master; may it be an item or gold for later use or on next parts of your map.

Anyway, rated 3/5 and Approved.

 

[Pyraeus]

Review emerges!

I have played your 2P campaign map: Human 01 and I must say it looks good and all. You made some good changes without changing much of what Blizzard originally made or damaging some important parts of the map. Though there is a typo in the 3rd spell of Captain Falric, the color code of the "Level" text is broken. Also, there could be a little difference with the Footman and Axeman except being a model change only. I would suggest make the Axeman's attack much more higher than the Footman but his armor lower than the Footman so they can have some advantages in battle if you'll ask me.

Others looks fine and all but maybe you could have added some award or rewards on killing the Slave Master; may it be an item or gold for later use or on next parts of your map.

Anyway, rated 3/5 and Approved.

Ideas taken and much approved. Map edited by your suggestions. However, the color code. No matter how I implement it. The color of the spell just won't change. Try it yourself.

 

[Lockheart]

I love your 2P Campaigns. On top there are not so many good 2 P RPGs out there.
Please keep up the good work. I appreciate it a lot.

For now I especially need this post to give the map the rating it deserves imho.

 

[akirebamba007]

I love it this map

 

[Gismo359]

Cool, you're back!

 

[Pyraeus]

Cool, you're back!

I was never gone, just on moving vacation.

EDIT: Once more updated. Added my newest and latest feature, Scoreboard. I added a description about it.

 

[Edge45]

Will check this cool update

 

[strannik]

hello, good job. when will be continue of the campaign other chapter?

 

[Edge45]

Ok, here's my thingy: :>

Hidden things

Suggestions:

* Fix some type errors like when entering Strahnbrad, where the orcs will say "He's escaping!, kill him!". It doubles, (check screenshot)
* The warlock skin looks unfitting right now, perphaps its better to use the default
* Arthas face or portrait skin makes him look like an old Llane or Varian was it, I kinda like him being his normal face
* Add some hidden items from the map to make it a little good
* Can I make a portrait of your Benedict model?
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Note: These are suggestions, so you can either do it or not it depends on you, except for the first part
Score: 4/5

 

[Ragnoras]

just suuggesting how about change blackrock horde textures to a Black Dark Horde orc texture because in wow balckrocks are.like that

 

[Pyraeus]

Ok, here's my thingy: :>

Hidden things

Suggestions:

* Fix some type errors like when entering Strahnbrad, where the orcs will say "He's escaping!, kill him!". It doubles, (check screenshot)
* The warlock skin looks unfitting right now, perphaps its better to use the default
* Arthas face or portrait skin makes him look like an old Llane or Varian was it, I kinda like him being his normal face
* Add some hidden items from the map to make it a little good
* Can I make a portrait of your Benedict model?
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Note: These are suggestions, so you can either do it or not it depends on you, except for the first part
Score: 4/5

Let me tell you in kind reply this.

1. Thanks for testing my maps. I lately realized you are an old war3 style fan. I appreciate the test you do and the suggestions you make. Also, make sure you test my latest version I released a moment ago.

2. The Grunt's sound will play only one time, but his lousy text "sometimes" and to some "rarely" appears twice. This issue is unknown why and I'm still wondering why the hell why. I'll try to figure it out, but still even a problem in the latest version.

3. The Blackrock Clan are seen usually in game as Pitch-Black, Pitch-Green, or Pitch-Gray skinned orcs. In the original they were described as dark-green skin orcs with glowing red eyes that signifies that they still had the blood of the demons. In WoW, it was somewhat different. As many were seen with very dark and black skin. I thought of the same deal of leaving the unit to it's original, but then decided to change it to foreshadow the events of my future plans of my 2Player Campaigns. The normal Warlock look will be featured for the New Horde that is playable during 2Player: Exodus of the Horde Campaign and 2Player: The Invasion of Kalimdor, while the Blackrock Clan would have it's own fitting Warlock that would seem way ugly and demonic that the humans would see in their eyes as a monster to not only hate for their past with the orcs, but because of their looks and evil invasions.

4. Arthas' new texture then wouldn't fit his face appearance well. I don't mind the new one much.

5. Secret materials and other stuff will be added in later maps that I plan to make, but items wouldn't be that for a good reason. If I overflew the items in every chapter by a lot... it would kill not only my brain cells, but that of the inventory. Secrets would be areas or even units that you would click on. Then something would pop out as a reward, or maybe not. Depends on what kind of a secret it is. But in every map there is a reference to someone. Including in this one.

6. The Benedict model isn't mine and that is what you have to ask the original model maker for permission. If he grants you it and you have time to spare. Go ahead and do it.

P.S:
Thanks Ragnoras and Edge for your suggestions and ideas. Keep it up and hope to hear more from you both. Also, I wanted to tell ALL who in the future plan to comment on the new terrain. I didn't want to make it feel special and kept to the old "War3 style" terrain. In the Human Campaign I plan to make the maps as "Lordaeron Kingdom-ish" as possible for the players to see the Alliance in a more advanced holy image of their former selves. So therefor when the undead come into the picture and corrupt the land for the players. I want the players to see how much the Alliance lost from the war due to such corruption and how much the land changed due to the Scourge's arrival. Which will be even more surprising when I released the Undead Campaign. xD

 

[Heinvers]

Updates, must play with someone some time :3

 

[Edge45]

OOOO , A Storm is coming, and it will engulf Lordaeron, :>

 

[mattdraw]

ss

I was really hoping before Uther left the map he'd be like "No, screw that noise. Let's wreck em' together!" and then 2nd players plays as him n sht.

 

[far336]

Fun map! If anyone is having trouble taking out Menag (bandit that stole the ledger) on hard difficulty, here's a tip: Use a hero to make Menag follow you all the to the starting location. Up there is a level 10 hero with 6 auras, and he's invincible. He can help you with the fight if he is near Menag.

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