[Campaign] Story of Rigel Galadhron: Rise of Emperor Grimeldon

[Lord_Disasthorm]

Lord_Disasthorm Presents Story of Rigel Galadhron: Rise of Emperor Grimeldon

About SoRG

Stories of Rigel Galadhron is my project in Campaign form contains my own fiction. Start at SoRG: Beginning of The Time, and ended at SoRG: Fate of the future. [Rainbow]Learn and/or ask more at this link![/Rainbow]​

Information about SoRG: Rise of Emperor Grimeldon

This Campaign contains a Role Playing Game map, some Cinematic map, and some Hero Arena map. This Campaign tells a history how a prince became evil and choose only darkness just like the Destiny and the Prophecy (SoRG: Rise of Emperor Grimeldon) until he dies (SoRG: Fall of The Emperor)​

Mini-Story

[tr][td]It starts when the King of Restareia had a mission to his Prince, Aletherion to check Moltendark in his prison. But the mission was failed Aletherion were possessed by Moltendark and freed him, the prison is exploded by Moltendark and then Aletherion with his friends find a passage through Necromourne Chamber. Aletherion took Necromourne(Dark Sword) and after he go home he kills his father. Well, the story goes...[/td][/tr]​

Screenshots

Screenshots Chapter 1 Screenshot 1 Screenshot 2 Screenshot 3 Screenshot 4 Screenshot 5 Screenshot 6 Screenshot 7 Screenshot 8 Screenshot 9 Screenshot 10 Screenshot 11 Screenshot 12 Others COMING SOON

Features

COMING SOON

Progress

0.35% (Maybe? XD)

Credits

[tr][td]- All [Rainbow]Flaming Soul Entertainment Members![/Rainbow]
and also
- Siega Editor
- Wietlol
- DatC3
- ~Nightmare[/td][/tr]

So what do you think Hivies? Feel free to give suggestions

 

[youness]

It looks good, good luck with it.

 

[Fang]

Nice thread (and project)! You were serious creating this thread am I right?
You should add credits

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

hmmmm storyline looks really interesting.....I will keep an eye on this....

 

[Lord_Disasthorm]

Fang can u tell me? Who's helping us?
@Youness: Thank you
@Theoden*of*KoMe: Thank you

 

[Daffa]

I expect a successful map out of this

 

[Fang]

Thanks. You too Daffy!
(Why I say thanks? Because I help Disasthorm with the story)

 

[Lord_Disasthorm]

You just edit a liitle of the story

 

[Fang]

Hehehe...
Hey Windrunner29 has 5 new screenshots on the chapter 1, why you does not uploading it here

 

[Fang]

I stop working on the Chapter 2, for my new RPG map...

[Rainbow]Mission of the Past[/Rainbow]

 

[Lord_Disasthorm]

You are free when Saturday and Sunday
edit: I can't edit this

 

[Fang]

You are not the one who can command me!
*Shoots Disasthorm's Head with Unholy Spear*

 

[Chaosy]

dark themed map? yes plz.

Personally I think story should be written from a third-person perspective in present or past tense though. Like reading from a book.

 

[APproject]

Story really sounds like original warcraft 3 human campaign, only names differs.

 

[Lord_Disasthorm]

Story really sounds like original warcraft 3 human campaign, only names differs.

Well, I think you're right, but with a huge differents.....

 

[Lord_Disasthorm]

Well, the blade was forged by the Doom King, Mortezzar Doomhearted as his loyalty to the Destruction Deathgod of Darkness with his armours like Battlecrown of Destruction and his 25 rings, Melkoddur Burzoduroth (Elgoris). Actually, the prince's betrayal was planned by the Deathgod himself, to remove the Deathgod's eternal enemy, Ilunnatar the One.

 

[Fang]

The mini-story is just like Wc3 to me too

 

[Lord_Disasthorm]

Yeah you can say that
@Chaosy
But its already third-person perspective since its doesn't mention me (Disasthorm)

edit: Added Screenshots

 

[APproject]

New screenshots won't show up. Probably these are from your private album, make sure to set it to public.

 

[Fang]

Too bad he is already offline

 

[Zwiebelchen]

You already used 6(!) different invented nouns with way too many syllables in the very short story excerpt of the opening post.
No offense, but this is just bad writing. Even Tolkien was criticized for his countless invented words and that guy probably got all the passes in the world for writing the one fantasy epos that ruled them all.

All I can say is: if you're a mapmaker, leave the writing to someone else and concentrate on the gameplay instead.

 

[Lord_Disasthorm]

You already used 6(!) different invented nouns with way too many syllables in the very short story excerpt of the opening post.
No offense, but this is just bad writing. Even Tolkien was criticized for his countless invented words and that guy probably got all the passes in the world for writing the one fantasy epos that ruled them all.

All I can say is: if you're a mapmaker, leave the writing to someone else and concentrate on the gameplay instead.

Yes, I know. I am concentrate on it (but not right now). What do you mean in the first paragraph? I must create the lore to continue. The guy's story is inspiring me. If you do not understand what I speaking of, well...... . Anyways, are you create Gaia's Retaliation ORPG?

 

[Zwiebelchen]

Yes, I know. I am concentrate on it (but not right now). What do you mean in the first paragraph? I must create the lore to continue. The guy's story is inspiring me. If you do not understand what I speaking of, well...... . Anyways, are you create Gaia's Retaliation ORPG?

Just saying. One of the critical errors a lot of mappers do is that they flood the players with nouns on story exposition.

If I read a book and read more than 3 invented words in the first paragraph alone, then I usually drop it immediately.

 

[Lord_Disasthorm]

Just saying. One of the critical errors a lot of mappers do is that they flood the players with nouns on story exposition.

If I read a book and read more than 3 invented words in the first paragraph alone, then I usually drop it immediately.

The noun isn't important actually. That makes the players not understand. Now I see. Well, you're right...

 

[Arad MNK]

Nice Project!

0.35%

Like 35/10000? lol!

 

[Windrunner29]

Hey! How is this now ? Are you still working on it ?

 

[Lord_Disasthorm]

Because of TBotT work, so RoEG is delayed for a while.

Edit: Due to something and lackness of work, now I hereby cancel and close this project. If anyone wanna complain please tell me instead. Pardon if I tell you just now.