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[Moderator]

10:53, 31st Jan 2010
enjoy: I wonder why you made wips for the cookie, but the bone icons I was suspecious about, you didn't make WIP for, even though you updated it alot after making the cookie? Well. It looks enough like a cookie.

 

[NoMoreChallenge]

Chocolate chip cookie? Looks like clay lump, I suggest to make it bigger and change the color (golden brown color, but not too bright)and make chocolate chips more visible. Add food in the keywords.
Maybe you don't need bg for food icon.

 

[Crabby_Spider]

I added food to the keywords, don't know why I didn't think of that one. As far as the bg goes, I posted it w/o one and didn't like it, niether did the user who suggested making it. I figured something subtle would work. Regarding the clay comment, not sure what to tell you there. Most of my homemade cookies look just like this, fortunately they don't taste like clay.

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[Boris_Spider]

Chocolate chip cookie? Looks like clay lump, I suggest to make it bigger and change the color (golden brown color, but not too bright)and make chocolate chips more visible. Add food in the keywords.
Maybe you don't need bg for food icon.

Looks like a clay lump? hmmm.

Most of the clay lumps I see look like cookies, but they usually don't taste like cookies though... >:

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[The Panda]

Is this cropped out of an image?

 

[Crabby_Spider]

Is this cropped out of an image?

No, it's made from scratch, like the real ones I also enjoy making, except you can't eat it! As I said the WIPs are posted in my gallery, but here's a link if that makes it easier for ya.

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[Amigurumi]

oh yay, a cookie

looks quite nice, but the chocolate needs to be bit bigger

 

[tee.dubs]

Num num, delicious. Could do with a bit more chocolate though.

 

[Crabby_Spider]

LOL It's just like the real thing, one person likes more cookie, another more chocolate, another would eat it if it was clay...

Thanks for the comments!
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[havard1993]

looks yum :3
Nice job on this one

 

[NoMoreChallenge]

Enlarge the cookie and add more chocolate.

 

[Crabby_Spider]

How's this for more chocolate...

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[Just_Spectating]

looks too flat,
like a pancake. a very wrinkly pancake.

 

[NoMoreChallenge]

looks too flat,
like a pancake. a very wrinkly pancake.

I agree, you should also make it bigger as mentioned and remember, chocolate should be bigger as the size increases.

Hope this helps

 

[Azsure]

Looks smashed, make it a bit more thick and it will be awesome!

 

[Slaydon]

a little more chocolate, how about chocolate on the bottom, ahrrr....

 

[Crabby_Spider]

OK, larger, thicker, and darker chocolate...

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Edit: I had a hell of a time getting this to upload, what's with the "server busy" stuff?

 

[Just_Spectating]

now it looks underbaked.

define the crusty parts a bit more, and there will be a nice cookie.

 

[Crabby_Spider]

now it looks underbaked.

define the crusty parts a bit more, and there will be a nice cookie.

Hopefully this one does it. I'm pleased, both with the feedback, and the result. Thanks!

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[Just_Spectating]

Nice

yumy cookie

 

[Amigurumi]

/me eats all of them

they get better and better, good job //\\〄.〄//\\

 

[NoMoreChallenge]

You have done quite a lot of work and it looks much better now. +rep

 

[tee.dubs]

oh wow, double choc goodness