Well...
Ofc your post number could make it hard for you to gather any help..
But I think the story is looking good.
But I find it a bit weird that you say it itsn't from the Warcraft universe and then use alot of names from it...
Anyways.. I don't think I would be much help (since I won't have much time to help the following year), but if you ever need a little help just pm me
