Muhahaha, Septimus! The tables have turned, now I am reviewing your work :)
- The terrain was pretty good at most parts, but nothing epic. Some parts, however(e.g. The ticket booth, the beauty pageant...) had average terrain, nothing special. I liked how you improved the indoor terrains but you need to focus on the proportions. For example, one cheese slice in the drunken man scene was bigger then the shelf and there was a giant candle that was "cutting through the shelf" which isn't very logical(I mean, at the very least it would burn down the wood).
- The cameras were pretty good, revealing the joke like that. There was no camera movement, but this is expected in this kind of map. However I would suggest finding a better camera angle.
- Most of the jokes were not that funny in my opinion. There were a few jokes that were really good and a few that were rather bad but most of it is somewhere in between - some people will like it, some won't. I recon this is the type of map which can get 10 votes 5/5 and 10 votes 2/5 because if you like all the jokes and they make you laugh really hard you will obviously like it and if the jokes don't collide with your sense of humor then you will dislike this map.
- The cinematic has voice actors which is always a plus no matter how bad the quality of the voices is.
Overall - An alright cinematic, worth watching if you want to get a laugh or two. Don't expect too much action in it or story though.
My Advice - Improve the terrain, fix the overgrown candle and maybe alter some camera angels. Maybe change some of the jokes, but it's a matter of personal opinion.
Score - A good cinematic. 3.5/5 because I disliked some of the jokes and I only found a few of them funny and because it could use more terrain tweaking.
It looks to me that there are a lot of positive reviews here. The terrain and camera angels were very good. Some of the doodads were weird proportion wise but still you can tell this map was well triggered.
I'm sorry to say but I didn't laugh at all though, and none of the jokes were very funny. I also didn't much care for the laugh track as it made it seem like you were telling me when to laugh and when not laugh. I think next time you need to sit down with a group of friends and tell them your jokes and make sure they are funny before you make a cinematic of jokes.
Also you need to work on the delivery, it seems like some of the jokes were just off...some of them were very inappropriate aswell like the drunk guy. Maybe instead of using all the fowl language you could have used a better choice of words.
I know I sound like somewhat of a jerk after seeing all these positive reviews but this cinematic was just one of those things that just makes you shake your head in disbelief because of how unfunny it is.
I'm sorry but I have to disapprove of this map and give it a rating of 2/5.
+1 for great camera angles and good terrain
+1 for clean triggering
-1 explicit material
-1 for horrible jokes
-1 laugh track and delivery
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It looks to me that there are a lot of positive reviews here. The terrain and camera angels were very good. Some of the doodads were weird proportion wise but still you can tell this map was well triggered.
I'm sorry to say but I didn't laugh at all though, and none of the jokes were very funny. I also didn't much care for the laugh track as it made it seem like you were telling me when to laugh and when not laugh. I think next time you need to sit down with a group of friends and tell them your jokes and make sure they are funny before you make a cinematic of jokes.
Also you need to work on the delivery, it seems like some of the jokes were just off...some of them were very inappropriate aswell like the drunk guy. Maybe instead of using all the fowl language you could have used a better choice of words.
I know I sound like somewhat of a jerk after seeing all these positive reviews but this cinematic was just one of those things that just makes you shake your head in disbelief because of how unfunny it is.
I'm sorry but I have to disapprove of this map and give it a rating of 2/5.
+1 for great camera angles and good terrain
+1 for clean triggering
-1 explicit material
-1 for horrible jokes
-1 laugh track and delivery
in some things you are right....but only in some.....there were good old jokes so pls think about them eartlier than you next time will spit on them....
and about that laugh track....its lame to put it in cinematic....
4.5/5
+5 for all
-1 for that laugh track
+0.5 for shoopdawoop
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It looks to me that there are a lot of positive reviews here. The terrain and camera angels were very good. Some of the doodads were weird proportion wise but still you can tell this map was well triggered.
I'm sorry to say but I didn't laugh at all though, and none of the jokes were very funny. I also didn't much care for the laugh track as it made it seem like you were telling me when to laugh and when not laugh. I think next time you need to sit down with a group of friends and tell them your jokes and make sure they are funny before you make a cinematic of jokes.
Also you need to work on the delivery, it seems like some of the jokes were just off...some of them were very inappropriate aswell like the drunk guy. Maybe instead of using all the fowl language you could have used a better choice of words.
I know I sound like somewhat of a jerk after seeing all these positive reviews but this cinematic was just one of those things that just makes you shake your head in disbelief because of how unfunny it is.
I'm sorry but I have to disapprove of this map and give it a rating of 2/5.
+1 for great camera angles and good terrain
+1 for clean triggering
-1 explicit material
-1 for horrible jokes
-1 laugh track and delivery
Well, if you have ever watch any television jokes such as just for laughs, comedy inc, mr.bean or any sitcom drama. They usually dubbed in the sound of laughing everytime a funny situation occur.
Jokes in this cinematic have been make as simple as possible to enable viewer to understand it, since some viewer are not native speaker of english language - they might be having hard time trying to understand it if the jokes is rather compleks.
If you disapprove (reject) a resources just because you do not like the way of how the map have been assemble is not the way it should be. I suggest you to learn more about reviewing.
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