- The cameras where pretty awesome, no "stops" in between or anything.
- The Storyline was very good
- Funny
- Unexpected twist xD
CONS ---
- Terrain is horrible, the desert is a whole heap of raised jagged things, use smooth to flatten it out a bit.
- THe Spartan town is flat and ugly, add some environmental doodads and more "town" stuff...
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Thats all I can come up with at the moment, sorry for the harsh review, I can see you put a fair bit of time into this! Good luck with any other stuff you make ^^
Hellblazer-14
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Last edited by Septimus; 06-30-2008 at 06:41 PM.
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Heyy.... i shouldn't have mentioned that cinematic making at the chatroom XD anyway i can smell this is going to kill me.. im going to school i'll tell ya later This was bloody hilarious but i agree on hellblazer-14's Cons so... 4 and a half/5
WTF???? I want my 3 minutes back. (would have been 30 seconds if shit had been timed right!)
Did you make that map all at once, then just release it? Did you actually watch it??? What's with the huge 30 second pauses in between each 1 second of dialog?
I'm sorry man, nice idea, but it needed WAY better execution. (I did like the loading screen pic though).
Dude, I had test it many times before I release it.
There is no 30 seconds pause between each dialog.
It just that the camera movement had been set to slow to give the impact of a slow and steady fight.
If I had just make the map all at once without watching it and tested it, there would be a lot of major bug on it.
Also, a professional map editor would always ensure their cinematic camera constantly moving around all the time. If you had watch the cinematic, you can be sure the camera is moving most of the time.
They would also ensure those dialog are readable instead of switching to another dialog just after 2 seconds.
