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| Dawn and Twillight Dawn and Twilight is the name given to the Second Age of Eiroth. This name came from the dark ages on Laerdon, where the Twillight meant fear and Dawn meant hope and salvation, against the foul Black Orks. After the Cataclysm, the list of the Kan Dynasty's allies grows thin, as the Temorian Mountains close and the Earth Elves are nearly extinct. However, Men will find that they have more allies to count on than they think; the time of Wood Elves is approaching. |
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05-23-2007, 09:18 AM
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Faction: Order of chaos (Back-up)
Order of Chaos
Also known as the 'Order of chaotrar'
Races:
Maghor: Ancient creatures (Demon elite) out of the pits of hell, most of them are spawned true time shafts and other distrubtions amongst the timelines between the normal realms and the realms of chaos. Some also crawl out of they're shells in the core of the earth.
Dervin: The dervin are said to be only winged creatures who fly high in the sky watching out for prey for the demons to catch, when they see a prey they seek contact with the nearest demon pack to devour it. Dervin are born in caves out of slimy eggs and such.
Sometimes they fly at such a hight that people think they see a bat, but if a dervin comes closer you will see its hundred times bigger then a bat. Also Dervin are not fit to fight, they have to sharp senses to sustain the heavy beating of swords the sound of magical blasts and the movement from closecombat would make the crazy, Thats why they are used as scouts high in the clouds where they're senses are working like highly-advanced eyes and not as supreme super sense.
Spectrum: The spectrum are creatures made out of the universe himself, tortured by chaos and higher powers they deformed into divine etheral beings that where almost immortal. They could only die of the transportation between worlds (They have the ability to teleport between serveral worlds,realms and dimensions).
Caratran: The caratran are the sonamed 'Hordes of chaos' and the famous 'Hordes/Masses of enemies'. Caratran are spawned by demon lords deep in the chaos realm to serve him and do the dirty work, also they can be vicious figthers in combat. They mass with eachother and together tear apart enemies from close or from afar (They have also the ability to spid burning acid). Sadly the Caratran have not many variations and demon lords are still researching the abilities of these creatures, also the Caratran have no armour against weapons and die very quikly of injuries.
Super human: Super humans are NOT mutated humans but even more then that, but there are only a few who survive the transformation. Super humans are born like a mutated human, they get infected by something undead but then suddenly they are striked with demon magic mixing this together with the infection and other conditions the human body becomes insane and starts to grow in strength and brainpower. Making the human mind insane but giving him huge psychic and physic powers he wont be able to join or ally any factions but ever then the order of chaos.
Notable Characters:
Lord Azakmodan (Maghor) (Rank - Demon lord 1) (DEAD)
Lord Balgamar (Maghor) (Rank - Demon lord 2) (ALIVE)
Vesper (Maghor) (Rank - Demon sergeant) (ALIVE)
Narkatar the watchtower (Dervin) (Rank - Dervin commander) (ALIVE)
Lord Lecter (Spectrum) (Rank - Spectrum commander ) (UNKNOWN)
Gashmon the blade (Spectrum) (Rank - Wanderer ) (ALIVE)
Gorgon spawrar (Caratran) (Rank - Caratran commander) (ALIVE)
Hellion Araatha Aseliot (Super human) (Rank – Wanderer) (UNKNOWN)
Character Descriptions:
Lord Azakmodan: The ancient demon lords name still makes the mortals of earth tremble in fear. Once he dominated the battle field with his fiery spectrum warriors together with spectrum commander Lecter. The world was on the brink of existinction when the final strike was blown upon him and his armies. Just when the world was supposed to blow the bomb*1 was defused and Lord azakmodan was destroyed by 100 mages which from he killed 56 before he died.
*1: The 'bomb' was a magical made globe stuffed with dark magic that was send into the core of the earth to explode on impact when it would hit the flames. Bringing all volcanos to eruption and tearing the earth apart.
Lord Balgamar: Lord balgamar is the ancient demon lord after lord azakmodan, now the great new leader of the Order of chaos he is planning an even greater end for the world. His plan is to regain the strength of Lord azakmodan and use it for his own good. Then with doubled power of BOTH demon lords to try to blow the world again.
Vesper: Vesper the demon sergeant that was always the right hand of Lord azakmodan that is now dead has joined Lord balgamar and his plan to destroy the earth. he knows when the earth is destroyed energies will break free and he can go back to the chaos realm where he came from. He will do everything to destroy anyone that obstructs his way home!
Narkatar the watchtower: The watchtower is his nickname, his job is to provide the Dervin race of the needed supplies to scout the area for objects/preys. Also he has more sight then any other Dervins and is huge himself! His wings are said that they could bring forth a cyclone and his breath would blow away mountains. Also he leads the nomad tribe called the 'Flying fortress'.
Lord lecter: Lord lecter once co-operated together with Lord azakmodan to destroy the world, once Azakmodan was killed he fled back into time and space and is now probably stuck somewhere between the timeshifts.(He can also be dead.. we dont know)
Gashmon the blade: The most fierce warrior the spectrum race has known has now become a wanderer. After the great defeat of Lord Azakmodan he fled together with Lord Lecter leaving even his leader behind. Not knowing what happend to Lord lecter he started to search for his leader, now still in search he has grown insane he hungers for power and his leader to once destroy the earth which he hates so much.
Gorgon Spawrar: The commander of the hordes and masses of Caratran spawned in the chaos realm. He also is now the leader of the 'Breeding process' in which the hordes are breed and new species can be developed. Gorgon spawrar did never leave the chaos realm, he always operated from there.
Hellion Araatha Aseliot: First known as ‘Johny separ’ living in a peacefull village he suddenly had to join the army. He was infected with undead diseases before he knew it, without knowing he was infected he fought demons and other abominations and he all survived it. Until that moment the toxic mix began to boil inside his body and made him an insane super power exalted above every specy you ever knew. Despite his power and insanity he fled beyond time and space to search his destiny. No one has ever seen him or never heard of him anymore, but some say he has returned now to earth and roams the land and plots to destroy it.
Cities/Clans/Tribes/Communities/Capitals:
Cities
Fitrra: Capital city of the demons on earth
Further there are only small camps and packs wandering the earth surface
Clans
Skeleton core (Sub-Clan)
The skeleton core is a group of demons obsessed with skeletons, the human carcass is they're miracle of prayer. Reviving the dead is they're job, providing also the forces for Lord Balgamar.
Skeleton candle (Sub-Clan)
The skeleton candle is a sub-group in the skeleton core, they oversee the whole demonic force that forms the skeleton core. They have mental contact with every demon joining the skeleton core and can kill any of the members if they betray, disbehave or do anything else what is not permitted within the clan.
The bone circle (Clan)
The bone circle is a group of necromancers empowered by demon magic, once human but revived at the altar of chaos they have gained the ability of sonamed Super-necromancy. Fearing no enemy they have stated themselves in the demon capital of fittra. They're job in the order of chaos is also to oversee the Skeleton core, the candle, and so provide troops for invasions.
The burning canyon (Clan)
The burning canyon is the demon elite clan of the Maghor, even exalted above every maghor high ranks the leader of this clan is Lord Balgamar himself. The burning canyon's base is located in a canyon that is on fire all time by magical flames which cant be distinquished. This clan is the head of the order of chaos and commands every other clan.
Flying Fortress (Tribe)
The well-known 'Flying fortres' is the Dervin elite scouting group, they are a nomad tribe flying full time in the air scouting for enemies and prey. The leader of this tribe is Narkatar the watchtower the Dervin highest commander himself. This is the only united group of Dervin in the whole Dervin community.
The white force (Clan)
The white force is a well-known spectrum clan, this clan forms the spectrum elite force also 'The white force' is known as 'The white squad'. Despite that they are elite they're numbers are small and aswell the clan is deminishing with every cassualty they take. Soon the clan would seize to exist.
Beyond time and space (Tribe)
They call themselves the tribe of time and space and the controlers of the universe, everyone knows they have high magic at they're disposal but never have they experienced it before. Only the name is quite familiar with the most races only never have they seen any members or groups of this misterious tribe. It is said they have also fled beyond time and space, thats why they name themselves that way in the myth.
Reincarnation (Clan)
The priest clan of the spectrum race is called 'Reincarnation' because they have the ability to raise the dead as spectrums. Kind of like as Necromancy the spectrums are formed with the body but also mixes the soul in it and makes the flesh its core and the etheral part the skin. No other specy has ever unrevealed the mysteries of this magic the only weakness is again that this clan is also dying.
The mass (Sub-Clan)
The mass is an Caratranic clan existing out of masses of the caratran warriors, they have allied together with the higher ranked 'The horde' and also they are under command of the 'Last invasion'.
The horde (Sub-Clan)
Unlike 'The mass' the horde is a vast and demonic army of highly advanced Caratran warriors. They have allied with the lesser 'The mass' and are also under command of the 'Last invasion'.
Last invasion (Clan)
The last invasion is the highest ranked Caratran clan that commands both ''The mass' and 'The horde'. Also it commands a army twice the size from both clans himself. It is led by Gorgon Spawrar the Caratran commander.
More coming soon!
Race Disadvantages and Advantages
Advantages:
Maghor
Size: Maghor are big huge and strong its almost impossible to fight them with a sword and a shield only. They also knock down 5 orcs in one hit easily. Only some of them are small they are much more times stronger then any other species
Hitpoints/Armor: The maghor have a great thick armored skin, even if they fight without any armor on they're body the skin is hard enough to reflect most attacks.
Dervin
Fly high: Mostly dervin fly high under or above the clouds, even if you spot them and know what they are and what they are up to you wouldnt be able to hit them. Only flying units can take them down but then its going to be a hard fight because of the size and speed the dervin have.
Its a bat!: Most people see the dervin as a bat because he flies so high you cant see how immense the creature is. (Some dervin also can be extreme small but then its a breeding mistake)
Ultimate sense: The sense of the creatures is immense even true clouds they could see a creature at miles high! also they hear thousand times more then us so sometimes are also used to spy, also they can flee immensely fast when danger nears.
More coming soon!
Disadvantages:
Maghor
Numbers: Maghor are only with a few mostly, packs exist out of 3 or more or sometimes 5. Hordes can be good used against them.
The light: Keep them away from light! Maghor can not resist any light and fear the day. Although they have extreme thick armor and could like survive five whole days in the bright sun they’re battle skill weakens and also does they’re armor, magic and the rest of them. (Demon lords are not affected by this condition) Also light magic can extremely damage Maghor units.
Dervin
Ultimate sense: They cant handle hard sounds or objects floating right in front of they're eyes, also fast close combat movements totaly hypnotize the big and sharp eyes of the creatures.
Size: No advantage at all! because of they're size the fast dervin are an easily target for aircrafts and other flying enemies.
More coming soon!
Diplomacy:
Allied Factions: The forgotten, Un’oorg, Black orks
Enemy Factions: Iron hand, Northleger, Kan dynasty,
About diplomacy: The order of chaos can ally any faction they would like to use for they're own good, if they want to ally a human faction they try to transform some lesser demons into a human form and so trade with the factions or spy. As you can see the Black Orks are in war with the forgotten but The order of Chaos allied them BOTH, if the black orks dont find out they can keep this alliance.
Last updated:Tuesday, May 22, 2007
Last edited by The_wand_mirror; 05-23-2007 at 09:43 AM..
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05-27-2007, 09:42 AM
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Only if it pays...
Join Date: Sep 2006
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It isnt accepted is it? why not if i may ask :p
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05-27-2007, 09:52 AM
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Black as the night...
Join Date: Mar 2007
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It looks good, i don't know if it will fit in the story, you will have to see.
Ask Rui for aproval.
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05-27-2007, 01:16 PM
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Development Director
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Join Date: Jan 2005
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Not very original. There is already a demon race. Besides, I don't really want DaT filled with Demons.
By the way, in DaT they're called Demoîns.
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05-27-2007, 02:32 PM
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Black as the night...
Join Date: Mar 2007
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I thought the same, and a 'good' faction is better atm i think. And we do always need players to play the factions that already excist.
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