Character-Razhan Elodyn

Char Name: Razhan Elodyn
Class: Sacred Fist
Other Names:Seeker of Freedom
Family:Dead
Race:Aidothi
Gender: Male
Born on: ???
Died On: N/A
Valuable Objects: N/A
Faction: Wanderer
Personality:Never Fight Unless He Need To, Daredevil
History:
Description:Tall, Dark Hair, Green Eyes, Strong and Agile, Carries no weapons or armor, many tattoos.
Special Abilities: Sacred Flames-Imbue his fists with holy flames dealing extra dmg,

Thanks for taking the time to do this character. However, you should use spaces between the words and the two points. Makes it easier to read.

Family:Dead

Can be replaced with [i]N/A[/i] instead.

Race:Aidothi
Description:Tall

Should add "for his race" or something similar, since Aidothi are shorter than normal Men.

Personality

Could use some work.

Special Abilities: Sacred Flames-Imbue his fists with holy flames dealing extra dmg

Holy Flames would be related to Holy Magic. Aidothi do not know Holy Magic, but if you write the history in a way that can explain how he knows that kind of magic (for example, writing that he was raised in Delaria or something), I might accept it.

Of course, this character cannot be approved yet since it has no history.

And that image doesn't look like an Aidothus at all, unless you come up with a good lore for your character, I do not think you should use that image. I mean, the picture is cool, but for the race of your character, it doesn't fit much. But I repeat, if you can come up with a good history, it'll be accepted.