Robber 1: Haha, stupid cops. Probably trying to get around the river now.
*Gun clicks*
Robber 2: Oh, shi-
Overall, it was very good. The humor was acceptable, the atmosphere the map pace set was very suitable for the sort of mood it wanted.
Also, the juvenile abomination fart part was also very good.
After his fart spreads through the continent, the national guard are aware.
Agent 1: What the hell? What is this? *Looking at radar*
Agent 2: Um..nuclear holocaust?
You could've maybe added that :)
Overall, I'd give it 82% / 100%
Terraining - 7.2/10
Humor - 8.9/10
Triggering - 8.8/10
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Isn't JfL/G planned pranks (like someone pouncing out of a bush or something)? Not random events (AFHV-ish)? Anyways, it made me laugh, but sometimes of pure WTF. Could have improved, could have gotten a few more original things in. The swoop da woop part was a bit off. The ability launched before the text appeared, which was just a small glitch, but it didn't seem so funny (could have not done the ability and had the guy free the other, yet he trips and falls to his death).
Terrain: 4/5 (well done, well planned. Did not exceed average)
Creativity: 3/5 (most was creative and original, yet some I just saw and went "WTF")
Humor: 3/5 (made me laugh, but somtimes for the wrong reasons)
Triggering: 4.5/5 (better then I could have ever done. Better than expected, but not by much)
Execution: 4/5 (came out great. Everything was put together really well, but not exceedingly well done)
Average: 3.75/5 (averaged. Wasn't the best I've seen, but wasn't near as bad as I've seen. I can't say I am demanding a sequel though)
Overall it was good and original, but can be improved.
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Name: Landmine
Use: Warzone havock and destruction of vehicles
Creator: Dr. Landimidion Lander
City of creation: Landminer City
Total kills in war: 2008.10
Current project(s): Map of Desterted Island and Single Tower Defence
Signature reality: [Error] [Memory corrosion detected]
Isn't JfL/G planned pranks (like someone pouncing out of a bush or something)? Not random events (AFHV-ish)? Anyways, it made me laugh, but sometimes of pure WTF. Could have improved, could have gotten a few more original things in. The swoop da woop part was a bit off. The ability launched before the text appeared, which was just a small glitch, but it didn't seem so funny (could have not done the ability and had the guy free the other, yet he trips and falls to his death).
Terrain: 4/5 (well done, well planned. Did not exceed average)
Creativity: 3/5 (most was creative and original, yet some I just saw and went "WTF")
Humor: 3/5 (made me laugh, but somtimes for the wrong reasons)
Triggering: 4.5/5 (better then I could have ever done. Better than expected, but not by much)
Execution: 4/5 (came out great. Everything was put together really well, but not exceedingly well done)
Average: 3.75/5 (averaged. Wasn't the best I've seen, but wasn't near as bad as I've seen. I can't say I am demanding a sequel though)
Overall it was good and original, but can be improved.
Well, the shoop da woop is funny if you know what is that.
Thanks for telling me the glitch, I did't notice that.
As for the jokes, I make it as simple as possible for viewer cause some of them might not understand it.
Hmmm, based on your score system. It should be 74/100 or 4/5
"I'ma chargin' mah lazer...SHOOP DA WHOOP!!! *Boom*". A common internet phenomena, especially displayed in the "This is Sparta" scene in 300, as shown on YouTube.
Shoop da woop is basically the sound made as he fires his "lazer".
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Actually the Laser idea was first created by Dom Fera ( I know him in RL ) and its called The Laser Collection, he has two. People make spoofs like the 300 one, and in the description of his first collection says Shoop da Whoop on it.
Good map
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