After my first cinematic was so thoroughly rejected (rated 2.5 out of 5) i realised that im no good at cinematics.
This is the map. Its bad, i know, right? I thought it was fine, but, oh well. Now, i would really like some tips on how to improve it. If anyone can help me, i would really appreciate it, please.
Btw, if im not allowed to do this, please tell me, because i couldnt find any rule that said i couldnt. ok.