View Full Version : Modern Day Battlefield
04-27-2008, 10:56 AM
Inspired by My Boy Jack the movie on TV.
04-27-2008, 11:02 AM
sorry, but thats only... bad...
Its too plane, and the flames dont look natural, and there lacks doodads, and that freaking car dont fit at all..
04-27-2008, 05:41 PM
It is way too plain. I would expect more Belgarath. The background looks nice, and the car is fine IMO, it's the middle area. No tile variation, and little to no doodads. Do you think this is good?
04-27-2008, 09:51 PM
Nope, not yet. I never say they're wips, although just about every one that I post is a wip. I still have to add in different smokes, combat areas - for which I'll have to do a model edit - and buildings, planning on barbed wires too. I think the car only looks bad because of the rifleman standing right beside it - it does look bad like that.
There is actually some tile variation in the middle :P but yeah you can't see shit all there. Need to clear up smoke, reduce the fog, add in shapes of buildings that you can see in the distance. ([/ramble[)
04-28-2008, 07:24 AM
*update: added a new screen shot. Still not done.
I would add some grass. Maybe add a little fire somewhere in the grass but little. Maybe a scorched building. A little rocks and it will be perfect. Too much fire I think. You could add more trees but don't put fire on them. Those in the background are fine. And one or two wouldn't hurt in the middle.
04-28-2008, 10:08 PM
Good atmosphere. Needs variation and maybe a little grass, as stated earlier. Even if it's dead. I think the fire is a little exaggerated. I can't see a tree of that size producing such big flames. Try playing around with the scales.
Hey Belgarath, you can easily do better then that!
I guess that a you could make it more flat at the middle. I can't help you anymore. Damn, lol
seriuously, I don't like it.
04-29-2008, 04:39 AM
I know I need to work on my fire sizes and vegetation, was saving that for later. Dunno when I'll work on it again.
04-29-2008, 10:10 AM
can i mention the fire has like no fuel to burn.. that intense.
+the trees look fairly small compare to that car.
04-30-2008, 11:27 AM
Maybe add some rocks and a small barricaded area.
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