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X.e.r.e.X
04-17-2008, 02:09 PM
Well I think these are better than my last one... at least i hope so :wink:

So here are the pictures

EDIT: Attached new picture (castle) cause didn't want to make another post for that

Gilles
04-17-2008, 05:30 PM
Can't remember what your last one was (too lazy to check), but this one is pretty good, and probably better. Maybe some ground fog might be nice, or clouds to try and make the far mountains look better. Right now the fog is a bit too... colorful? I can't explain it. Some of the trees are kind of ugly, I suggest removing any similar to the ones in the second picture.

X.e.r.e.X
04-17-2008, 05:48 PM
Well you can see my previous work here http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/showthread.php?t=66187
And I'm not so good a using those cloud thingies really.... So only the fog and those few trees were the main problems? If so then i think I'm getting a little better :grin:

HappyTauren
04-17-2008, 07:05 PM
when taking screenshots, make sure you put all your video preferences to max. Nice terrain tho

Parkietje
04-17-2008, 07:19 PM
Quite nice, You´re improving rapidly. I like the castle but could really use more work.

X.e.r.e.X
04-17-2008, 07:19 PM
Well glad you like it, but could ya tell me things what i need to improve? (really need those if I want to get better terrainer)

Oziris
04-17-2008, 07:32 PM
I like the last one and the first one

FamousPker49
04-17-2008, 09:17 PM
Of course comments will help you, but the most help you can get, is from yourself. Keep practicing, look at pictures from real life, many times what people are lacking in a terrain is good environment. Which is what your castle is missing, and it is very... Clean. Dirty it. But the one thing you can do to become a better terrainer is just practice.

~Void~
04-17-2008, 10:50 PM
You are too modest. For your second terrains these are really nice and you seem to already be good with atmosphere. My only suggestion is to then use lighting! I have a tutorial on that if it helps, it's over in the general map tutorials or whatever I'm too lazy to link it right now ;)

UchihaSasuke.gr
04-18-2008, 12:06 PM
they are good but in the 3 first the background is not well made.

Nudl9
04-18-2008, 01:03 PM
Ohh castle looks neaty, would be awesome for a map.

X.e.r.e.X
04-18-2008, 01:10 PM
Well glad you like it Nudl9, but I think it's funny that is fully empty almost :cool: