Watterfall on the Valley

Just a landscape that I have done to pratice.

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Attachment 2: Update

The background mountains bother me. Did you just use shrubs?

Shrubs over raised terrain.

Looks pretty nice. Maybe it would look better if you tinted the shrubs a little bit more green, and imo it doesn't look good when that grass grows in the water. It should just be on land, and it should be dirt tiles where it's water.

Yeah, you are right.
Thanks for the suggestion.

I like it ^^

It's magical.. like some of those fuzzy japanese MMORPG's only then a good one XD

lol that looks nice! but u could use some rock tiles on the waterfall there, it looks like its flowing down on grass
+rep

Hmmm... Wich rock tile type would be better? Village Rock, or Ashenvalle Rock?

Not bad, but I think you should use different type of sky, and fog

+rep

The grass going underwater is funny.

Indeed grass doesn't grow underwater. But its a nice terrain on exception of being so bright it looks like a nintendo game

Update

The first picture was better, and the shrubs seem to be facing the same angle?

I think the edited one is a bit better, but you should have kept the same distance as the first one, looks better when it's a bit further away. Anyway, the thing that bothers me most now is that it's too sharp from the cliff where the last waterfall comes down. Maybe smooth it a little or add some rocks/other fitting doodads on the top. I also like that you added more background. +rep

First one was way better. I'd try tinting the grass. It doesn't really match at all.

Very nice terrain!How did you make that water effect?

Doodad I think.

Gilles said:

Doodad I think.

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really?i think it's quite hard to make it this way though..

UchihaSasuke.gr said:

really?i think it's quite hard to make it this way though..

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Most people seem to be using it now actually.

Yes. The water effect on the first scene looks good, so does the shrub spam.

But the background is weird. You'd better not shrubspam the background hills next time