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@Edhel-dur: Added.
@Undead_Lives: What he meant, I think was that if you put so much description that it takes away from the actual story, that it serves no more purpose than to take up space, and make the part choppy. (Most of these tips are aimed at stories I believe, at least, mine are, because I don't really write that much poetry.)
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