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[Sunreaver]

Cool another wretched model

 

[Edge45]

Those ears look pretty tall
but looks ok, except for the head

 

[Renly Baratheon]

"Will work for mana".

 

[Guildenstern]

I really think the Wretched can be a nice addition to a Blood Elf techtree. For example, a Blood Elf spellcaster (ex: Priest) can choose to upgrade/devolve into a Wretched and gain Chaos damage but lose something in return.

 

[Chen]

I really think the Wretched can be a nice addition to a Blood Elf techtree. For example, a Blood Elf spellcaster (ex: Priest) can choose to upgrade/devolve into a Wretched and gain Chaos damage but lose something in return.

No, a nice addition to the undead race, the Blood elves would not accept them.

 

[Sunreaver]

No, a nice addition to the undead race, the Blood elves would not accept them.

Of course not they themselves are Kael'thas warrior's he himself is a wretched too.

 

[Verhalthur]

Excellent use of textures, really!
I didn't think wretched models would be doable without any custom textures.

 

[morbent]

AWESOOOME! I love this! 5/5 +rep

 

[Moderator]

15:01, 6th Feb 2014
MiniMage: Would've probably looked better if the armor would've been tattered, ruined, with holes.. Maybe a arrow sticking out here and there, but it's still approvable in its current stage. With some more changes, I will prob. up the rating.

 

[Xonok]

His hands look quite big, but I doubt it can be noticed ingame.

 

[Chen]

Wow cool, what map/race will you use it?

EDIT: You should Fix this problem:

 

[Ujimasa Hojo]

Wow cool, what map/race will you use it?

EDIT: You should Fix this problem:

That's present even from the original Blood Elf Lieutenant model. That's not noticeable in-game anyway.

 

[Chen]

Okay. Will you make more Wretched Wretcheds?

 

[WerBackIII]

Really like it but would suggest using either a custom texture or a different, more "decay"-y texture for the armor.

 

[Letgoit2]

just make more hehe thats the stuff i need

 

[knight26]

Really like it but would suggest using either a custom texture or a different, more "decay"-y texture for the armor.

He makes massive custom races maps, any contribution to lower the filesize overall, is his primary objective
Besides, they're meant to be elves after all, they're not undead, just wretched.

 

[Argos]

It would look better without helm or not with swordsman/footman one.

 

[Heinvers]

It looks useful and decent 4/5

 

[Heinvers]

Looks good. Maybe change the helmet and/or change the sword. 4.2/5

 

[Shadow Fury]

Pretty good model, keep creating more so you make a complete race! Maybe next one "Wretched Archer"

 

[Guildenstern]

You've been doing a lot of stuff concerning Lordaeron with the Forsaken models and now the Wretched ones. Is a new map series coming?

 

[Guildenstern]

If I'm not mistaken in wow. There is a quest in which you have to retrieve the sword ''Trol'kalar''

and returns it to Galen

EDIT

or what's left of the sword. But if it is retrieved I don't remember

I think you can just have a sword model attached to his right hand in-game.

 

[Moderator]

18:23, 3rd Feb 2014
Deolrin: I'm afraid that it looks too much like the original archer but with a different face. I think it requires more changes. All of your other Wretched models are awesome and of higher quality, so I think this one should fit with them more.

15:38, 6th Feb 2014
MiniMage: Work on the walk animation. Also, the body of the archer still has healthy skin and the hair does not look affected. The body should naturally be as grayish as the face and the hair would be withered, gray, or white. I would also suggest you change the cloak into something undead-ish to fit with the other texture changes.

Also, work on lowering the filesize.

Misha: it could use a bit more updates, like, changing her death sound to maybe banshee ranger? also her 'skirt' could use being slightly different, just to go along with the top. and see if you can shave a few bytes off the filesize

i guess now it looks alright '~'

 

[Letgoit2]

yeah keep it up

EDIT: now it looks not so good : / its to undead/troll like the first one was in my opinion better

 

[tomoraider]

This looks awesome. Keep up the good work!

 

[Shadow Fury]

Seems like you did the model I told you about! It looks great as all others though the face looks kinda weird. Which one will be the next one?

 

[Blood Raven]

Maybe it would have been better if you had used the drow ranger face texture. Also the hair must be white or dead-looking, i'd recommend the white banshee one.
Otherwise, it looks neat 3/5

 

[Edge45]

Looks like he's not eating and dehydrated for years, Again with the creepy face
Looks cool though: 4/5

You've been doing a lot of stuff concerning Lordaeron with the Forsaken models and now the Wretched ones. Is a new map series coming?

He could be bored or making an alternate melee map

 

[PlankingWolf]

Maybe it would have been better if you had used the drow ranger face texture. Also the hair must be white or dead-looking, i'd recommend the white banshee one.
Otherwise, it looks neat 3/5

This thread comment right here is the perfect solution.
I don't like the look.

 

[NhazUl]

You should change it more, perhaps giving the archer a more ghoulish appearance and skeleton archer animations? But I don't think any of the Wretched are fit enough to shoot with a bow.

 

[Misha]

Oo you think they're strong enough to wear metal armor?

 

[Misha]

yeah, really needs more wretched-ness

 

[Forsaken]

It's the weird part of the face to tiara(headband), and maybe you should use another concept for the clothes

 

[Adaethus]

Okay there's a few things that really stand out here:

The shoulders look pretty awful, both in shape and wrap.
She seems completely flat chested, the texture looks quite stretched as well.
Her hair just doesn't look right for some reason.

Fix those things and it'll look significantly better.

 

[Ujimasa Hojo]

You've been doing a lot of stuff concerning Lordaeron with the Forsaken models and now the Wretched ones. Is a new map series coming?

Nope.

 

[Kyrbi0]

While I'm not really partial to the Wretched race in the storyline, I have to commend you, Ujimasa, on this particular model. See, you didn't just take the Blood Elven Priest and mod his skin a bit or thin him up a teench. You actually re-wrapped the face, made some model editing, and changed up the weapon-style; giving him a glowing right-hand instead of that staff. Very nifty (don't see that a lot in Wc3), and also a creative re-interpretation.

 

[knight820]

Nice model.
5/5.

 

[PlankingWolf]

Can you provide a screenshot each time you update your models?
It always confuses me.

 

[Ujimasa Hojo]

Can you provide a screenshot each time you update your models?
It always confuses me.

Sorry about that. If the picture hasn't updated for you yet, then press F5.

 

[PlankingWolf]

Sorry about that.

Thanks.

 

[Forsaken]

Really better now

 

[PlankingWolf]

Looks better, but the wrap on the chest is a little bit buggy.
But, it looks pretty good by now.

 

[Adaethus]

Meh, I liked it way more before.

Wretched aren't dark blue, the chest still looks weirdly shaped and wrapped, and the different skintones don't match at all.

 

[knight26]

To be honest, against all popular opinions here, I think the previous close-to elven look fitted her better. I mean, wretched are not supposed to be undead completely, and this actually looks more undead than elven right now.
Anyway, that is my opinion only.
EDIT:: On the mini preview I see a different model, on the big preview a purple-ish model, so which one is the updated one? I'm confused.
I tried the Shift+F5, shows me the purple one.

 

[Kyrbi0]

Yeeeeaaaahhh... I like a lot of the changes so far, and can appreciate that it needed to be more "different" than just a thin High Elf Archer... But I'm not sure the greenish-blue skin was a step in the right direction. Maybe a good Forsaken Archer (though AndrewOverload's got that covered (hm, wonder what happened to him?)).

 

[Letgoit2]

To be honest, against all popular opinions here, I think the previous close-to elven look fitted her better. I mean, wretched are not supposed to be undead completely, and this actually looks more undead than elven right now.
Anyway, that is my opinion only.
EDIT:: On the mini preview I see a different model, on the big preview a purple-ish model, so which one is the updated one? I'm confused.
I tried the Shift+F5, shows me the purple one.

i agree

 

[Chen]

It looks like a forsaken now.

 

[Engkanto]

Maybe try to make her less "blue" and more "Pale", cuz idk man but ithink this looks more like a drow or an undead... maybe try using the zombie texture for the chest? i dont really know what to do with it to make look more "Wretched" and less "forsaken".

Well, Just my opinion.. each to his own..

 

[Edge45]

Ngeeeh,,..... looks more creepier
I kinda like the last creepy archer rather than this, it looks
forsaken now

 

[Klayton]

I've worked with the Dreadlord texture before in order to make a Nathrezim woman. There is a certain section on the ear of the Dreadlord texture that can be used for her chest. If you can get it right, it will fix the mismatched skin tone. Unfortunately it's been a year or so since I've worked on models, so I no longer have the model. :[

Edit: Also the siren's head (with a bit of editing) works well with the Dreadlord texture. I found a WIP picture of the head on a flash drive.